One Piece - Halfway Broken 104-106
Added 2026-02-14 14:07:54 +0000 UTC
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As always, thanks for all the corrections on the various stories :-)! They'll make their way into the next master file releases for each fic.
Novus Peregrine
2026-03-05 18:59:47 +0000 UTCOkay, looks like I won’t have to be worried about Hancock… Edit 1: …no one “by” Kaya… …no one “but” Kaya… Edit 2: …what he “weas” seeing… …what he “was” seeing… Edit 3: “If” might have been… “It” might have been… Edit 4: …at all “but” remaining… …at all “by” remaining… Edit 5: …the powers “at” be… …the powers “that” be… Edit 6: …listened “too”… …listened “to”…
The Foreign Traveler
2026-03-03 06:12:15 +0000 UTCA lot of my issue with getting around to reading the Manga is that I was always a follower of the Anime, not the Manga. The anime, unfortunately, is absolute and utter trash post Fishman Island or so. The pacing went to hell in a way that makes Dragonball-Z look positively reasonable. I've been repeatedly told that the manga is better, but that still means I have to actually figure out where to start reading and spare the time to do so...
Novus Peregrine
2026-02-14 17:44:19 +0000 UTCI sympathize with her, but I just can't really LIKE her, since she responded to that trauma by abusing others left, right, and center. Using her beauty to allow her to get away with almost anything.
Novus Peregrine
2026-02-14 17:42:14 +0000 UTCPersonally I rather like Hancock, but that's more cause I figure she's so deeply traumatized that disliking he makes me feel bad. Honestly I wish Raleigh and Shaky had a daughter, have a new hottest in the world then. Honestly really glad for the summit, get to meet Jinbe from nally and he's generally a pretty chill guy.
Orchamus
2026-02-14 15:48:37 +0000 UTCThanks for the update! I really enjoyed all of the separate pieces that were included in this release. Kuina got Conqueror’s! So so glad you did that since as I stated in a previous comment, I truly believe that since her goal to become the world’s strongest swordsman is now rock solid, her moment of weakness when she was a child with her questioning her abilities as a woman would not matter as that clearly isn’t the case anymore. Anyway, Zoro and Kuina getting the time to improve their conqueror’s haki during the timeskip is very reassuring in light of their future fights against the God’s knights and Elders. And you should definitely read post timeskip! Honestly I get that it’s a bit of a disappointment in some regards (disappointing character development for most of the crew). I personally stopped reading at the start of Egghead for multiple reasons (though I still read updates on what’s happening every so often), but you will definitely have an easier time writing the rest of your story if you’ve read the manga fully at least once. Funnily enough, although Oda dropped the ball hard on the Strawhats’ character development, he did a pretty solid job on the enormous cast of side characters in post timeskip so it should help you quite a bit with your own writing. Thanks again for the update! x
Camille
2026-02-14 15:46:54 +0000 UTCChapter 104 A/N 1: I'm sure some of you noted that Neethrax likely has access to Pop Greens. Frankly, I'm not sure I'm going do use them at all, but even if I do...I'm not really convinced the Boin Archipelago is worth visiting as a whole. So she presents an alternative way to get them, if I decided to introduce them. Frankly, I've never been overly impressed by them. A/N 2: Hina is a bit of a tricky one, as she's not shown really growing that much in power in canon. I think I've come up with something interesting for her to work on, though...
Novus Peregrine
2026-02-14 14:15:03 +0000 UTCThis comment is for author's notes! Beware spoilers! And if you want to comment on one of them, please do so in a separate comment NOT nested here, in order to keep these orderly!
Novus Peregrine
2026-02-14 14:11:48 +0000 UTC
