Harry Potter - Pandora's Box (23-29)
Added 2025-10-09 04:24:04 +0000 UTCUpdate - Realized while doing author's notes that there were two chapters 27s. Should be fixed now.
Whew! Cut this one a bit close. Though, in part, that's because I've also been extending and polishing that Mass Effect concept I mentioned a bit. Anyway, fair warning the editing on this batch might be a bit rougher than usual, I was pretty out of it finishing it up. That said, it's within a couple hundred words of the 15k mark I shoot for, and I'm fairly happy with the results. The author's notes likely be particularly informative this time, so you might want to read them even if you normally don't bother :-).
As always, the new bits of story are attached here in various formats, and I'll be updating the Master Files in the Pinned Post shortly. I will also be doing aforementioned author's notes in the comment section in a bit! Enjoy some more of Harry Potter - Pandora's Box!
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Edit sharing time… Edit 1: …first journey last year, with “various of” his friends and acquaintances coming and going… …first journey last year, with his friends and acquaintances coming and going “throughout the trip”… Edit 2: It had been from “Blaize”… It had been from “Blaise”… Edit 3: …only “writ quite a bit larger”… …only “with something quite a bit larger”… Edit 4: What they had instantly “had” was the… What they had instantly was the… Edit 5: Nothing high end, like could be found at… Nothing high end, like “what” could be found at… Edit 6: Maybe “they” House Elves… Maybe “the” House Elves… Edit 7: …their own gravity welsl?!… …their own gravity wells?!… Edit 8: …it will cause a “week” point… …it will cause a “weak” point… Edit 9: …sell them “as” a much… …sell them “at” a much “price”… Edit 10: …hadn’t killed “of” yet another… …hadn’t killed “off” yet another… Edit 11: …doesn’t want to see “and” advanced… …doesn’t want to see “an” advanced… Edit 12: …by sneaking them “to” list of… …by sneaking them “the” list of… Edit 13: …every right to “morn” Harry’s… …every right to “mourn” Harry’s… Edit 14: Not that they didn’t “under” the… Not that they didn’t “understand” the…
The Foreign Traveler
2025-11-01 10:59:10 +0000 UTCNormally, the monthly poll starts on the 9th, this month was an exception since there was a poll about modifying the poll. It's currently up through the 25th.
Novus Peregrine
2025-10-20 23:59:35 +0000 UTCI'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the typo spot! It's been fixed in my master file and will be included in the next update :-).
Novus Peregrine
2025-10-20 23:58:22 +0000 UTCJust started this story from QQ, binged it all in a few hours, love your work! Also, I found a typo (but only the one!) 'but since only a cross-selection would be available at the in-Hogwarts store and prices would be better at their own ships, it wasn’t a very big risk. ' should be shops not ships.
greatGUARDIAN100
2025-10-20 11:52:48 +0000 UTCI started and binged this in one day. I am loving this so far, 1 dollar a month is well worth it. When is the monthly poll?
John_Lasko
2025-10-18 00:59:07 +0000 UTCWhenever it wins the monthly poll.
Novus Peregrine
2025-10-11 13:38:09 +0000 UTCjust found this story on fanfiction I love it how often do you update this story
Bigbowser
2025-10-10 10:33:49 +0000 UTC...It is a nickname though?
Novus Peregrine
2025-10-09 21:23:31 +0000 UTCCan you stop having people call Harry 'Har'. It's not a nickname of any sort and makes me think everyone is a fucking pirate. Is it really so difficult to type out two more letter's?
Shane89
2025-10-09 12:34:00 +0000 UTC
