Whew! Finally got this done! Sorry again about it being later than usual, folks. I needed to do some brain storming as I'd expected them to spend longer in Viridian and my outline for Pewter was basically just 'Train for the Gym.' Which would have been totally okay, if it was only 5,000 words or so. But when it turned out that the Pewter section was more like 10,000 words, I needed to break up the training with something else so that it didn't become a slog. I'm happy with what I came up with, but I did need a brief pause to come up with it in the first place ;-).
Anyway, the final result this time is right around 14,500 words, so pretty typical length wise. Enjoy the new addition to A Very Confuse Pokémon Adventure! As always, the new bits of story are attached here in various formats, and I'll be updating the Master Files containing the entire story in the Pinned Post shortly. I'll also be posting some author's notes in the comments once I've, you know, actually written them.
Art Note!: As usual, the art's not mine! The first is a very minor modification of a piece by Iahfy. I enhanced the eye color a little, but it's otherwise entirely theirs. The Lingerie 2B is by Digital-Pastel.
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