Pretty 3 rw page 13-18
Added 2025-01-04 18:36:57 +0000 UTC
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Oh, I was just coming to re-upload some pages because they seemed a bit empty to me. Yeah, you may feel that they are a bit rushed compared to the original, the most significant changes are the elimination of space and dialogues that I now find unnecessary. And well, more angles. Thank you for share this <3!
Bastriw
2025-01-07 00:15:47 +0000 UTCI don't know what it is, exactly, but something about this newer version feels more rushed. I went looking back at the original and there are certain scenes that feel more detailed and 'put together' in some ways. The characters are all up-to-date with how they should look, but there's... Something different. The best way to describe it is with an example. There is something really satisfying and visually clear about the original in this page in particular - https://i.gyazo.com/5194fe39ab13b8ca931a9cc88a719a9a.png The way the point with the beer bottle gets a full frame. The way the characters sitting next to each-other are given a full wide frame, rather than the two characters farther apart being cut in frames next to each-other. The slower action as well, Pato still coyly drinking his drink. Everything feels so connected, in-world, like we're looking at one room. The remake feels like we're floating in a white void more often, having similar shots but dedicating very little space to them, despite there being plenty of empty space leftover on the pages for them. I'm a fan of the series, but I'm kind of struggling to find what makes *this* version the better version, beyond the cleaned-up dialogue. (..Though, like in the screenshot comparison I provided with the "And it seems like he likes the idea already" line, even the better-tuned grammar is missing some of the artistic context of the original) This isn't meant to be mean or weird, It's just very interesting analyzing the differences in-between these two distinct pieces. Hope you find it interesting too.
Maxwell
2025-01-05 02:50:48 +0000 UTCThat last panel on page 16 🥰
ThorAlexander
2025-01-04 18:41:55 +0000 UTC
