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WIP - Crow Update

This post is coming out a bit earlier than usual, as I need some approval from you guys before finalizing it.

The last poll on Crow had overwhelmingly high votes for the monkey’s paw option, so I went ahead and started some work on her. (The pictures are all the iterations of the crow. Original, first tweaks, and redrawn)

Let me explain the thought process here. Initially, I was just going to make some minor changes to Calliga. Tweaked her hair, face, and wings. But overall, I still wasn’t liking her at all. I don’t know. I just couldn't put my finger on what was bothering me, but after some extra thought, I decided it was probably the pose, so here I went to redo everything.

That’s when I reached the new iteration of Calliga. The first picture there.

I took some stuff from design two and started over, and here we are. I like to think it’s just an overall upgrade from the original! I am very proud of this one. Honestly, I thought I was going to have more to say, but I don’t really have much to say other than I hope you guys like her.

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Comments

The first picture - the one with leg bandages and no hands - is phenomenal and has my vote. Fantastic job with the redraw!

The Radio Star

I think it's the combination of hands, wings, and hair.

Zehmun

Maybe you didn't like the original because of her hands 😂

Taz

My vote goes to the OG (pic 3)

IF

The choker is to lean more into the goth aesthetic she has going on.

Zehmun

I love all 3 tbh, the full redo has my vote tho

Taz

Hell yes, looks awesome! A fantastic enhancement from the original Crow (No shame to the original, it's still good in it's own way) Can't wait to see it finished!

A dude that likes Omori

Don't get me wrong, she was good before, but now she's jaw dropping. Hope to see more of her or possibly a progressive scene like Hildegard

StrapBuckner

She looks good ! She does has this downer/goth vibe. Like that one fateful encounter with a kind woman down in the slump who will share a can of beer with you while smiling. You know this type, Can't put the word on it though. When you look at your previous drawing and the redesign what you might not have liked is clearer. The old design is actually very thin. The body proportion are way different right now and the wings are way more detailled than the previous design. The jacket is nice though I didn't think she'd be that exposed. I see she's got a choker, for lore reasons or because it's stylish ? This design leaves her with no hands though. Maybe give her claw like hands, but as it already looks great. I'm not sure if it would be a good idea to change it. Overall, This redesign makes me way more interested in her than before.

Darian

wow it was pretty fast now she looks like gyaru girl i cant wait for the final result

nelp121212

I love her in every timeline

Dagda

looks great! unsure if peen should be larger, it looked a bit larger in the trein reboot 23 image and in-game. edit: i guess looking across the images, it may have just been a little inconsistent

Marcel Fiere

I'm glad you liked her!

Zehmun

I couldn't tell, as I don't know myself. All I have right now is the promise that I'll do more crow content.

Zehmun

Honestly I really like how she looks I suppose the best way is more angular better I guess sorry I'm not an artist not sure what the right word is either way I think she looks fantastic

bob billion

Will there be a protagonist x crow🤔?

DeadMemories


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