Page 1 revamp test
Added 2020-04-19 10:35:32 +0000 UTCThere was a significant amount of time I stopped working on this comic between pages 8 and 9. So much so I wasn't sure the first 8 pages would old up to the rest.
So I did a little test, I do like how the newer one on the right looks. But not sure if I should spend the time updating all first 8 pages.
What do you all think?
Comments
You make a good point about finishing the other pages first. I do have a lot of the later pages to finish up now that I got them back from my inker.
LurkerGG
2020-04-20 01:48:37 +0000 UTCshocked face on her is worse hand and fingers on cock are way worse her arm is long portioned and kind of gross in new one everything else better in new
Kurada
2020-04-19 18:23:46 +0000 UTCI like Link’s face a bit better in the first panel, and their figures look better in the main body of the page, but I miss the cartoony emotion spikes I for Twinrova’s face in the second panel and Link’s bulging testicles are smaller. As to redoing the opening... I guess that’s a defensible idea? But just avoid redoing the whole thing too often. There will always be old work you’ve improved on.
SpectralTime
2020-04-19 13:48:50 +0000 UTCIf you think it's worth it, do it. But please, focus first on finishing the pending chapters pages, then go crazy with the remakes. There are several little details I liked about the newer version, perhaps the biggest one being the more refined face proportions, it can even be compared to official artwork (in a very bimbolicious way, of course).
2020-04-19 11:49:52 +0000 UTCIt does look better, but personally I don't think updating them would be worth the time. Might be worth the piece of mind it gives you though.
Stephen Smith
2020-04-19 11:00:52 +0000 UTCDefinitely go back if you know you can improve on them.
Animeplayer
2020-04-19 10:58:28 +0000 UTCAs much as I hate to admit it, mostly because it means we have to wait longer 😂, the newer one does look a lot better. I especially like the change in face style.
FrostBite X39
2020-04-19 10:37:15 +0000 UTC
