New Short Story - "The Boobslug..."
Added 2025-02-06 13:54:50 +0000 UTCThis one went up a little faster than I was expecting. I only submitted it yesterday. As a result, I'll do this post today and the harlot spotlight I was planning to put out today, tomorrow.
The short story is up in Literotica's annual Valentine's Day competition. You can read it here:
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-boobslug
What is a horror story doing in a Valentine's Day competition? Yeah, that's something I like to do. A few years back I dropped one of my more savage horror stories into the competition for a laugh and it's become an irregular tradition for me to sneak in a horror tale as an Anti-Valentine's Day story.
This one has a very weird monster girl and leans heavily into boobs and lactation fetishes.
It was a weird one to write. The monster girl came first, and it was one of those scenes I knew I had to write while it was fresh in my head. Then I figured out the secondary viewpoint character and why they were there, and knew that was a strong idea that needed writing. After that I needed to link it to Valentine's Day, which was a bit of a stretch. The first draft was a bit rough with a big info dump at the end. Surprisingly, it came together fairly easily while typing it up. I chopped the ending info dump right down, but hopefully it should still be fairly clear what's going on.
As I was writing it, I also realised there is scope to expand it out further. Maybe a fairly straightforward novella/short novel, which will just be an excuse to showcase 5 (or 6) unusual monster girl sex scenes. I'll see what the reception is like.
This is my January release (sort of) while I'm hard at work writing the slime smother nun mini-boss scenario. I hope people enjoy reading it. Let me know what you think below.
Comments
I like the House how it is, it has a more mysterious and sinister feel rather than the overtly nightmarish quality of the other two (good horror readers that we are the very fact that most of the daemons prevented from going straight to the kill makes us think there has to be something way worse going on behind the scenes).
CrimsonCrown
2025-02-09 11:58:22 +0000 UTCIt has options. My original thought was it could work like the original Crow comic, but in a stealthy way. The reader sees a man getting a tour of this weird brothel where the girls kill the punters, but in reality he's watching the gang that murdered his daughter get picked off one-by-one. It could also function as the standard framing device for a revenge type anthology. As with the Red Lights Backrooms, it's annoying that I come up with better versions of the HoHH House, after creating the House and setting for that particular game. :D
Many-Eyed Hydra
2025-02-07 13:29:13 +0000 UTCAt full strength for that one! The narrative device is powerful and would be a strong one for interlinking stories. I think it's more suited to it than the tablet succubus. At first I thought it might be happening in the HHoH.
CrimsonCrown
2025-02-07 00:05:04 +0000 UTC
