New(ish) Story - "Let Sleeping Beauties Lie"

Still working on "The Good, the Bad, and the Monstrous Beauty".  As with most things these days, hit a slight block near the end of the story.  Only a temporary one, I'm far enough along with the story that I'll jump it over that last hurdle fairly soon.  Rather than be an idiot and bash my head fruitlessly against a wall, I switched projects onto something else to clear my head.

(Okay, there was some fruitless bashing of my head against a wall.  I'm still a bit of an idiot.)

This is a rewritten version of one of my H-space monster girl bestiary stories.  I mentioned I wanted to try and put a proper collection of them together, but the originals were too short and needed some work to bring them up to an acceptable level of quality.  This is an attempt to do that.  It also turned out to be a little more fiddly and time-consuming than I would like, so I might need to work on improving that process.

It's still fairly short, but I put in some more background and stretched out the sexy parts.  It feels more like a proper standalone short story now (I hope!).  I'll likely keep tinkering away with the better ones and see if I can put a proper collection up on Amazon at some point (maybe start a series - there is an arc to the stories).

It's a H-space story, so the focus is a little more on the horror side of erotic horror.  I really like to get good'n'nasty with the bad ends for these, so you have been warned!

This is also a bit of a bonus.  It is a timed-exclusive for patrons, but only a short time as I'm planning to upload to Literotica later in the week.

(It may turn out to be a longer timed-exclusive as there is a distinct possibility Lit might reject this for being a little too nasty.)

Any feedback would be much appreciated.  I'm trying to fake an American "voice" for these stories.  Normally I'm pretty okay at that but occasionally something incomprehensibly British sneaks in.  So, if you're US and read something that doesn't make sense, let me know so I can eradicate any weird Britishisms that might have slipped by.

(If you're more familiar with the US armed forces also have a good laugh at anything I get horribly wrong).

Not much longer for the next proper short story I hope.  In the meantime enjoy this one.

-manyeyedhydra