The Device - Mall Mania - Early Access!
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Today I've got a swap-heavy little number for you! It's got a lot of fun awareness play and a good ol' bit of chaos in it to boot!
Let's see the synopsis!
Nolan's chaotic best friend Nat has got her hands on a reality-bending swap device, and what better place to have some fun than the local mall? But as the two are swapping people left and right, it's only a matter of time before they get caught up in the action themselves! Now with their relationship turning upside down, will the swapping drive them apart? Or will they finally end up as more than friends?
This one took a few extra days! It got a lot longer than I was expecting and was giving me trouble the whole way! The delay would have been much worse, actually, if not for an incredible miracle by my editor Selkie. Thanks to her it's up here today and not the middle of this week. Thank you Selkie!
Gosh, this was a lot of fun to work on. I try to play around a bit with the exact mechanics of the swaps, story to story, figuring I can get a bit of variety from different models following different rules. This one is a little less "Boob? I don't have boobs! These are manly pecs *jiggle jiggle*" and more "Of course I have boobs. *Jiggle Jiggle* I've always had these things. What's wrong with that? "
I get many requests to do more swap stories, or people saying they're sad I don't do swap stories anymore, but I do try to occasionally revisit that well. The last one was Crossing Wires, which was 8 months ago so this one I guess is overdue. The problem I keep running into was that whenever I had sat down to write a new one, I quickly discovered that either the characters don't really work, or that the premise would be better as a non-swap story. I think I've learned it takes a special sort of character to be willing to just go crazy with a device, and that's what I need to be looking out for going forward!
As previously mentioned, the next update is going to be My Master The Bimbo pt 2! After that it'll be another short to keep things varied, then more My Master!
As always, if you like this one (or didn't!), please let me know! I love reading your comments or likes or hearing from you on the discord!
And a big thanks once again to Selkie, for her amazing edits, suggestions and that overnight miracle. Go check her out on smashwords or TGS if you like this kind of stuff! Further huge shoutouts to Coth, for his eyes, to my fiance for her patience, and to all of you for your ongoing support and readership! Thank you!
Enjoy!