Poll: Neuroprint Story Direction
Added 2025-04-10 09:41:00 +0000 UTCAt the end of Chapter 1, our protagonist finds her intern’s collection of videos and figures out whats happening to her.
But… what if she didn’t?
Been considering a minor rewrite that keeps her unaware. Both directions would be fun, and since this is a premium tier story I think this is a good opportunity to let you all decide.
1. Keep it how it is. She’s already found the stash and knows what’s going on
2. Rewrite it slightly so she stays in the dark. No big reveal.
Comments
that's still a possibility. this is just about the end of Ch. 1
kiwibat
2025-05-12 07:52:01 +0000 UTCBoth are good directions, one where she knows but change she change, and the other. But what if she found out futher along when she cannot change because she doesn't want to?
Mark Farnham
2025-05-12 07:30:10 +0000 UTCthat’s why it’s a tough decision
kiwibat
2025-05-10 10:56:43 +0000 UTCI like both directions
Britt Fast
2025-05-10 10:51:51 +0000 UTC