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Poll: Neuroprint Story Direction

At the end of Chapter 1, our protagonist finds her intern’s collection of videos and figures out whats happening to her.

But… what if she didn’t?

Been considering a minor rewrite that keeps her unaware. Both directions would be fun, and since this is a premium tier story I think this is a good opportunity to let you all decide.

1. Keep it how it is. She’s already found the stash and knows what’s going on

2. Rewrite it slightly so she stays in the dark. No big reveal.

Comments

that's still a possibility. this is just about the end of Ch. 1

kiwibat

Both are good directions, one where she knows but change she change, and the other. But what if she found out futher along when she cannot change because she doesn't want to?

Mark Farnham

that’s why it’s a tough decision

kiwibat

I like both directions

Britt Fast


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