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FBM 2 - Time Out

Introducing.... Mio, Guapo, Croc, and Molly! I don't wanna say too much about them, because I want you guys to form you're own opinions, but I will say this. It felt a little "risky" to introduce so many characters so quickly in this story, just because I know readers can often lose track of who's who. Rowdy and I went back and forth on the ordering of these first 5 or so updates trying to decide what was the best course of action, and in the end I decided to keep things authentic to the way I wanted to write them... not overthink the ordering of characters and what not. You'll meet all the main characters, and most of the side characters quickly in this story. But I think they're all individual and unique enough to stand on their own. (I hope)

Anyway, let me know what you think! Are Croc, Molly, and Mio are different than you expected right off the bat? <3 Or Keplan?!

It's so crazy that the canon has officially started and we're getting to know everyone from scratch in a sense.

PDF down below if you need it!

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Comments

“Fabio-looking!” bahaha

Marii

I’m glad they’re all easily distinguishable! That was a big hope of mine actually. Their personalities are quite different too, but it’ll take more time to see it for sure

Mccull

The different reactions to keplan are subtle for now. But you made them all very visually distinct. I'll def have no problem remembering who's who as they give up more of their personalities.

jj


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