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A Curse's Passion Chapter 18 (The Boy in the Shadows)

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Why Google Docs? Great chapter BTW.

Adam Clark

Another great chapter. Loved the dream sequence and that the group found out about the TWT ahead of time. Gives time for the trio, especially Ron and Harry to mull over joining, and Malfoy can't hold his knowledge over their heads on the train now. My only complaint is that Hermione's measurements were too imprecise. I feel she would've been much more accurate and perhaps marked a 100 meter line on the ground, or conjured exact weights in kilos instead of settling for rough estimates.

The Humble CTurtle

Interesting part at the end, I wonder what the reaction will be when she finds out who it is

Elias


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