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A Dragon's Legacy Chapter 10 (Blood and Steel)

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Soon

PerfectPage

Please update 😭

Alex Taute

Bro

Alex Taute

Leanor dies and daeron avenges him in that way it compensates the velyarons and leanor joins his joffrey in death cole dies and daeron and daemon face off

Winter

what is with the constant repeating conversations

Abdullah Hassan

Very good so far. Really enjoying the story. I do wish the pace was greater tho, the build up to anything meaningful is very slow, and I feel like I read way too much fluff and repetition from 2 chapters ago. Things like Alicents meeting with Cole was nice the first time to characterize both of them, but the 2nd felt forced and unnecessary. Just small critiques, but excited to see how the next update will go

Jay Young

Mate your teasing us with how these chapters end XD

Henry Cochrane

this so good need an update asap

surger

Damn, need a new chapter stat!

Mandragoran

I vote for Leanor to die, the velaryons should never have bonded with dragons. They gotta go.

nble1

I'm sorry for the mistake. I fixed the one about Rhaenyra and Silverwing, and I will go back to check if I made any other mistakes. Thank you for letting me know.

PerfectPage

Did you already forget that rhaenyra already saw silver wing being ridden when she went on a flight in like ch 7-8 It's strange how several of your chapters have information repeated like it's new or repeat convos almost like with Cole and the queen about Jon and his sword and taking it

DarkestCalling

That is certainly a twist I didn't see coming! There are a number of things Jon/Daeron can do here. He could attack Cole and try to kill him first, thouslgh undoubtedly Leanor will get in the way and Jon needs no distractions. He could offer to assist Leanor in attacking Cole but that will probably get rejected and Leanor to turn his anger towards Jon. He could attack Leanor first, defeat him and then attack Cole. He'd win of course but Leanor would hate him for stealing his vengeance He could allow Leanor to fight Cole. Leanor would die and then Jon can step in to give the Velaryons vengeance for their fallen son. The ramifications would be huge though in regards to the marriage pact and whom would take Leanors place

D;arve Robinson


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