Avatar of the Seven Kingdoms Chapter 7 (The Road to White Harbor)
Added 2025-02-28 06:22:11 +0000 UTCClick the link below to read the chapter
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Comments
Jon's so bland in this story. When is he gonna change at all? Book Jon's inner monologue's at least, hidden sarcasm and tongue spiced up his POV's. But this one has none of it. It's show Jon in book form, boring. And you're dragging out him and the elements annoyingly slow. We see multiple new benders in series, without any teachers, create bigger blasts of fire etc the first time they do it. Hell not like Korra had teachers either at three years old, she just knew she was the avatar and could already blast bursts of fire, rock etc.
0Jordinio0
2025-04-21 02:57:19 +0000 UTCThe maths don't math... Cerwyn is very close to Winterfell, and very far from White Harbor. The way it's written here makes no sense... At first I thought there was AI processing at the end of the process (which I wish wasn"t there), but the more I read, the more I'm starting to thing it's far more than just at the end. A lot of things seems to net make sense
alecB
2025-04-14 15:42:31 +0000 UTC
