Industrious: Engineering Marvels - Chapter 6
Added 2023-11-16 01:41:42 +0000 UTCWell, thought I was going to finish this last night, but couldn't quite. That ended up being a good thing, tough, because I opened the document up with fresh eyes and added nearly a thousand extra words. Woo!
Anyway, next up is... hmm, I think I'll pay The New Ron some attention, and then either another chapter of Winning Peace or the mainline of Industrious. We'll see how time allows.
Since I don't think I've said it recently, thank you all again for the amazing support you've shown me and my writing addiction. I really appreciate it.
Comments
Just re-read this, if Erik takes that speech to heart and grows up with his Obi-Wan/brother/father figure’s connections and teachings the mutants are going to have one hell of a champion for their rights. Somewhere less naive than Charles, but more hopeful than Magneto.
thevolunteer
2023-12-01 13:22:59 +0000 UTC“Skin met skin” I thought they wore gloves on missions.
Zerak
2023-11-21 13:52:04 +0000 UTCAm I the only one that thought of skrulls?
Axel Wate
2023-11-20 22:31:46 +0000 UTCTbh this has kind of become my favorite story
Murica-Man
2023-11-17 06:27:39 +0000 UTCYou do realize that Dormammu is not an average dude, right? After all, is the average dude rules over an entire dimension? And even then, for a 'regular dude' that just got all the basic information of the nuke and the resource for it, it is entirely possible for him to derive the bomb. This is especially relevant, since time means nothing for Dormammu, and he got an entire dimension's resource for doing anything he wants.
gaouw ganteng
2023-11-16 17:50:08 +0000 UTCI know how a nuclear bomb works. I can't make one. Even worse, it was more likely Dormammu snagged the labels off the buttons that run the Inspired Inventor. The buttons are there, they all work, it is just that our MC has no clue how anything works.
Tristan R Mitchell
2023-11-16 17:32:33 +0000 UTCMystique is that you? If so is she a free agent or working for someone else?
Luker number 5
2023-11-16 07:46:59 +0000 UTCIIRC, Dormammu just managed to nibble the part of MC's soul that explain the mechanic of II, right? Making the MC forgot how his power work, while the power itself still work for MC. However, since Dormammu knows how it work, can he reverse engineer and/or cobble up a simile? Because I don't think a noob Strange could keep up with II-armed Dormammu. Or maybe it's irrelevant for such a being as him?
gaouw ganteng
2023-11-16 05:12:26 +0000 UTCBoooo! Boooo the Cliffhanger!!!!
Sage Berthelsen
2023-11-16 03:09:25 +0000 UTCLove this so far even more than the one it branched off from hope his power is intact
Austin
2023-11-16 02:33:38 +0000 UTCWhy? It’s Clearly called chapter 6 /s
Matthew Robar
2023-11-16 02:19:55 +0000 UTCSince Erik is around is the MC keeping an Eye out for Essex, because the Man needs to Die a horrible Death before he gains his Laundry lists of Powers and Perfects his Clone jumping making him near impossible to permanently put down. Though I wonder what the Magic users or beings of power will make of the MC and his connection to Inspired Inventor. So much interesting stuff coming
Rockinalice
2023-11-16 02:11:10 +0000 UTCDon't worry, they're in disguise. You're not supposed to recognize the name.
Slayer Anderson
2023-11-16 02:05:39 +0000 UTCBetter than the Marvels at least ? But who is this Sarah? Because i have no knowledge of anybody like that.
Guilherme Bezerra
2023-11-16 02:01:02 +0000 UTCI would call this chapter… marvelous.
thevolunteer
2023-11-16 01:49:48 +0000 UTC
