Winning Peace - Chapter 13
Added 2023-07-18 12:21:13 +0000 UTCNot too much to say, other than the appearance of a probably-recurring character and possible love interest. It's about time for that.
Otherwise, look for another chapter of Industrious later this week and, uh... something else? Maybe? Part of me still wants to write more Nexus Event, but I might end up doing a chapter of Speedrun or Where Your God Is.
Mystery Box!
Comments
Well I hope the Last Dogs plot line is wrapped up soon and we move to the Mass Effect aspect of the story. While I have enjoyed your writing I have not enjoyed the Last Dogs part in it. But hey it’s still enjoyable to read. For the record I just binged the story as I was putting off reading ti for a while.
Zerak
2023-08-21 19:15:00 +0000 UTCThe more I read the more sure I am this entire fic is inspired by Command & Conquer. The GDI vs NOD comparisons just make themself up. Only real difference is that there are 2 Kanes, one for each side.
Guilherme Bezerra
2023-07-20 14:07:38 +0000 UTC"Aperture Science Technologies" ... We will do what we must because we can
MadGreenSon
2023-07-19 05:06:12 +0000 UTCLove it so far
Austin
2023-07-18 14:28:54 +0000 UTCI'd be worse. "I have deathrays and warbots. Shut the fuck up or else."
Evilhippy
2023-07-18 13:35:22 +0000 UTCThe weird thing is, I’d pay a lot of actual money to see a good animated Remake of Hoodwinked. And I’d ABSOLUTELY pay a shitload to watch a good Empowered Trilogy.
TravelerOfTime
2023-07-18 13:01:21 +0000 UTCThat’s people in a nutshell.
Matthew Moore
2023-07-18 12:51:22 +0000 UTCThe only real problem I have with the dialogue is that the critic seems incredibly shallow from any semi pragmatic point of view. The entire story revolves around how one man, with one hell of a super power yes, was capable of stopping the total destruction of mankind's civilization and is well on the way of trying to start an actual golden age. And then some people try to criticize him about what he did and is doing. Without actual alternatives being brought to contend with his view and actions. It seems almost childish really.
Guilherme Bezerra
2023-07-18 12:45:25 +0000 UTC
