The New Ron - Chapter 25 (Slight NSFW)
Added 2023-05-24 11:49:14 +0000 UTCWhew, that was... not easy to write, for some reason. Had to really work for it. Anyway, looking at what I've gotten out this month...
I owe you guys two more chapter of Industrious to finish the current arc out as well at one Code Geass quest update, so look for those before the month is out.
Once again, thank you for all the support. I literally couldn't do this without everyone here, so take my earnest appreciation for all of your help.
Comments
I'm planning to do something with Shego, don't worry, but for the sake of the story it needs to happen out of order. As far as the 'rushed' comment goes, I can't say much beyond feeling that this being the way I felt it should be written.
Slayer Anderson
2023-05-25 11:02:19 +0000 UTCI’m down with a nsfw chapter like any deviant but this one felt maybe rushed? I also would have liked some scene from the waiting with a mind controlled Shego. Like throwing a moral question or devil’s advocate debate for changing a supervillain while they waited. Still a nice chapter but it doesn’t feel on par with your usual.
Sage Berthelsen
2023-05-24 12:32:50 +0000 UTC
