Industrious Chapter 27
Added 2023-02-26 11:17:37 +0000 UTCOkay! Apparently exhausting myself by shoveling gravel for three hours is detrimental to the energy I have for writing, who knew?
I certainly should have.
But, regardless, here's the chapter. I'm going to have something else up next (maybe either the first chapter of the new SAO fic or Winning Peace, but I'll get back to working on Industrious for another chapter or two after that.
Comments
Well, he’s screwed now. They’ll never let him leave after this, and if he tries he’ll be target number one for forced intellectual labor.
Acrimonius
2023-02-27 06:47:48 +0000 UTCLol yes! Female snake!!
Sage Berthelsen
2023-02-27 03:20:36 +0000 UTCI never knew how much I wanted loyal female Orochimaru until this moment.
Alex Piskura
2023-02-26 18:11:27 +0000 UTCAfter 25+ chapters of setting up a wild action chapter appeared. It used c;liffhanger. It was super effective. I'm really curious how this will turn out. A civilian training ninja candidates and showing great improvements combined with his other contributions. Then he takes on and disables/kills multiple chunin level opponents. And now most likely he set off a mini nuke in the forest outside the village walls as he most likely used one of his properly made explosion tags (instead of the normal that use a failed fire technique to explode). The most crazy twist based on some other changes would be Kota getting cornered by his pursuers and then saved by a loyal female version of Orochimaru (that would be very confused why Kota is more scared of her instead of his pursuers) that would then become the jonin sensei of a team made out of Satsuki, Narumi and Yakumo with Kota as an assistant teacher so Orochimaru could act as a bodyguard (like Kakashi with his Sharingan was a safety measure for Naruto). Kakashi might be playing Tobi for all I know. Or be the new Pain due to anger at Konoha for his father's treatment.
Jaroslaw Jarmul
2023-02-26 16:16:06 +0000 UTCOrochimaru doesn't send the Sound Four/Five for every errand. Where was Mizuki planning to take the Scroll? Orochimaru has very few really competent underlings. But I'm honestly expecting Orochimaru to be another victim of gender bending and actually loyal to Konoha. Of course there will be a MC freak out when they meet about what the hell is going with this world.
Jaroslaw Jarmul
2023-02-26 15:49:28 +0000 UTCThe nice part is that it showcases how good the MC got to be, fighting enemies like that without holding so much back. The bad part is that it showcases how good he got to be without further instructions fromnthe konoha nin. Basically this was the last breath he's got to take before the illusion he isn't worthy of being a ninja is shattered. And good or bad is now going to have to play ninja politics with the Village and all its people. That is either going to go very well because of all the support he has or its going to be very tense. The fact hes got the Uchiha, the Uzumaki, the Kurama and even the hokage on his "side" is going to be countered by who ever got those chunnin and was trying to get him. I'm betting either orochimaru (though it does not seem his style) or foreign ninja.
Guilherme Bezerra
2023-02-26 15:14:23 +0000 UTCI want more please.
Sage Berthelsen
2023-02-26 13:30:07 +0000 UTCLoved the Acid Spit! UtahRaptor Kotaro is a Huge Success! Those Dinosaur Boruto episodes must’ve inspired you heavily! Really impressive how He Tears Muscles to shreds with a Touch!
SaffireSpirit13
2023-02-26 13:26:30 +0000 UTCI feel like the attackers shouldn't have bothered with a verbal cue to attack once they figured out they were made, but I guess they weren't that competent. Just competent enough to get into Konoha, which history has shown ain't that hard.
Kotawa Ma
2023-02-26 12:13:17 +0000 UTChnmm since Danzo is out of play it might be some foreign Shinobi or maybe Orochimaru's people?
Tom
2023-02-26 12:10:42 +0000 UTCUh oh. Hopefully things haven't completely fell into the deep end with this. Hard to say with how many times foreign ninja have infiltrated kohona.
SirWaddlesworthThe3rd
2023-02-26 11:45:50 +0000 UTChow dare you post a chapter at 6:30 AM while im supposed to be asleep you fiend, *continues reading* how could you do this to me.
fausto escobar
2023-02-26 11:35:52 +0000 UTCHoly shit!!! I love this chapter. Finally we see Kota not playing around. But I really hate waiting for the next one. Hopefully the continuation drop soon.
gaouw ganteng
2023-02-26 11:30:41 +0000 UTC
