Industrious Chapter 25
Added 2023-02-11 14:41:57 +0000 UTCDamn, I'm actually surprised I finished this in the time I had set for myself. I'll be working on a quest update for the rest of the weekend, so I wanted to try and get this out for everyone who wanted to see some more Industrious. Once I get my quest submission finished, I'll likely have either another chapter of Industrious for you early next week or a chapter of The New Ron finished.
...there's also the outside possibility of a new fic coming down the pipeline, but that's still kind of vague.
Until then, everyone stay awesome!
Comments
I liked this chapter. The insight we got into fuinjutsu was fun. hopefully we get another New Ron soon, really looking forward to the fallout of that last one.
Vanathor
2023-02-12 01:50:02 +0000 UTCFiller chapter be filling.
Sage Berthelsen
2023-02-11 17:25:41 +0000 UTCMaking a space where Sharingan, Byakugan and Otsutsuki Bullshit (Zetsu fall in that category) can't see or get into is definitely the right thing to do it can also work a a Panic Room I'd any of them come for Him.
Rockinalice
2023-02-11 15:28:11 +0000 UTCIf I do not remember wrong Danzo was an AU change, he is already dead
Axel Wate
2023-02-11 15:10:01 +0000 UTCKota has no idea how utterly monstrous he is becoming. He already surpassed all the other sealmasters by the simple expedient of knowing more and knowing better then them. Now he is going to be inovating and turning his stuff to a even more higher level. I am just starting to get a bit worried about the lack of actual opposition. Sure there is Danzo on the horizon but either he is going to be dealt with or he is going to be on the fic forever. Frankly I'm thinking this fic need some more external worldbuilding. Maybe some alternate POV showing some of the knock down effects from our protag discoveries and efforts? Would be funny to see him being mentioned by the Hokage again.
Guilherme Bezerra
2023-02-11 15:05:59 +0000 UTC
