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Industrious Chapter 24

As should be a surprise to no one by now, Industrious won the poll and The New Ron took second.  After counting the votes on Subscribe Star, Petal to the Metal took a distant third.

As promised, here's the next chapter of Industrious, with chapter 25 already started.  I'll likely have a chapter of Winning Peace or a quest update done before that, though.  Next chapter will be exclusively tinkering and some not-quite-mad science.  Very irritated science certainly, but not mad.

Thank you all again for your support, I'm incredibly grateful as always.

Industrious Chapter 24

Comments

Great chapter❤️❤️❤️

Sage Berthelsen

I wonder, was it a lucky coincidence or did Tobirama predict they’d put up walls, helping in his plan to isolate and slowly degrade the Uchiha…?

Marc Beans

Lol if anything Danzo is probably the person that would do anything to protect the goose that lays the golden eggs.

Mario Nunez

Even if Kota doesn't outwardly acknowledge it, it should be pretty blatantly apparent that he's emotionally attached to several people by this point.

Slayer Anderson

Not a fan of the decision at the end, and we still haven’t received a clear reason why he changed his goal from leaving. Abandoning, as used in this chapter, implies a level of emotional investment and guilt that doesn’t fit with the cynical/realistic outlook he has referenced repeatedly. It also represents an undue risk of imprisonment or weaponization. Genjutsu hypnotic suggestion?

Acrimonius


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