Industrious Chapter 15!
Added 2022-12-06 11:37:37 +0000 UTCMy hand is still a little messed up, mainly due to the stitches pulling when I stretch my fingers the wrong way, but I'm getting them out at the end of the week so I should be back up to my regular typing speed soon.
Next up will be a Semper Quest update for my Code Geass SV guys and then I'll likely have another Industrious ready for the weekend. Now that we've gotten some intrigue and fluff out of the way, we're back to the normal stuff with a Tenten & Yakumo training session up next.
I hope everyone enjoys the update and I thank everyone once again for all of your support. It really means the world to me, so thank you again.
Comments
A beaver works as a spirit animal for him. I guess he probably doesn't have the chakra if they turn out to be a crafting themed summon. Has he been signing his work at all? A beaver could work for a symbol. I can see where he's coming from with Satsuki. Like, you could take Satsuki apologizing about her mother as her implying she is going along with a ruse to protect her feelings regarding the pizza. Kota clicks with her way too well, though. Satsuki has shown intent to set up a more even relationship once she's got her own job, too. I guess we don't see if she has her own admirers to compete with him, yet. Otherwise I don't see her cooling off anytime soon.
Esp
2022-12-12 06:32:22 +0000 UTCTwo beavers are better then one, da ra ra ra ra, Two beavers are better then one, there twice the fun, ask anyone :D Something tells me his going to be shanghai'd into being the 3rd member of their team lol Puppy dog eyes will be involved 😂
Alexander O'Brien
2022-12-07 20:13:05 +0000 UTCFew things. The beaver plush, because he has brown hair and builds things. But, also because he's going to be getting beaver (pussy) in the future? The Chakra Metal charge. Was it done now, in part, because Tenten will be graduating soon and he plans to give her a full on chakra blade? Fooling himself. He seems to be doing it less now that he has connections and is explicitly a known factor. But he's still saying "if I go out and become a technological hermit" instead of making more solid plans for what he should do instead.
Bob Saget
2022-12-07 18:05:34 +0000 UTCHow about male Sakura with a crush on Naruko, just to complete the genderbend triangle?
Yichi Zhang
2022-12-07 04:33:12 +0000 UTCman if Kota knew that once he is out of Konaha then its a open season on him he would revise his plan
Tom
2022-12-06 22:06:59 +0000 UTCI'll look into it, but this may just force me to make a new $5 tier for anyone who wants correction privileges. I'm not sure what the fix will be, but it's very irritating to me as well.
Slayer Anderson
2022-12-06 21:21:38 +0000 UTCFinally! I don't know what I did to my google drive that didn't show any of the new chapters, but hey, I got it working and it's fucking worth it. Je, whoever the third member of group seven is, he has my pity.
Eibon Alain
2022-12-06 20:58:52 +0000 UTCHey have you considered using a microphone to write, that way you minimize your typing to editing and the like.
Gabriel510
2022-12-06 19:18:50 +0000 UTCMan, those Harem vibes. Kota better invest in some Management skill when puberty hits.
Wildebranch
2022-12-06 15:05:02 +0000 UTCSomeone changed the font. Evil munchkins.
Sage Berthelsen
2022-12-06 14:45:35 +0000 UTCThe way the font size keeps getting messed with is beyond annoying. Is there a way to lock down the document without removing the ability to make suggestions?
Vanathor
2022-12-06 14:29:01 +0000 UTCNice chapter, a little breather from the bombshells of last one, wonder how long it would take for other villages to figure out what Kota is.
rockus4
2022-12-06 13:37:44 +0000 UTCA woman on either side and they're fighting over him. Kota: "Kill me." (slits throat with thumb) Stall Owner: "Shit out of luck kid." (laughs)
Slayer Anderson
2022-12-06 12:40:48 +0000 UTCGood chapter. But what was going on in this part. "I made eye contact with the stall owner again and discreetly reached up to scratch at my neck, running an extended thumb across it in a very distinct pattern. The old guy lurched with restrained laughter, snorting loudly and shaking his head as he turned away to prepare our food."
Kurlinni
2022-12-06 12:28:29 +0000 UTC
