Industrious Chapter 11!
Added 2022-11-14 14:02:48 +0000 UTCUpon consideration, I think I'm going to start splitting up chapters into groups of ten, just in case it's causing a freak error in some documents.
Anyway! Here's the next chapter of Industrious! I put a rush on it since I've had so many new people show up just for it and there was a cliffhanger out. So it seems the right thing to do here.
Satsuki vs. Kota, Three Matches, Go!
Edit: Also, to avoid confusion, I've changed the links to all of the old Industrious chapters so they go to the Copy document now, because one or two new patrons were having trouble with the old links.
Comments
The foot blade reminded me if Raiden in Metal Gear
Joanny Hernandez
2025-01-10 19:38:13 +0000 UTCMmmm... nothing like a good read and comprehensive break down of shinobi reasoning in the morning. In all seriousness this is really good, so thanks for the story and continued updates.
Jr Zzz
2022-11-17 23:48:54 +0000 UTC1) Kota already knows how to tree walk/water walk, he'd figured it out before he even took a rank in chakra control, he just hasn't really used it or displayed the ability. 2) His chakra pool is about one-third as large as canon Sakura's was at the time of the genin exam.
Slayer Anderson
2022-11-16 07:39:52 +0000 UTCSo what technique do you guys think Kota is going to request? It almost certainly has to be something useful but low-cost otherwise he wouldn't be able to use it. Slayer a couple of questions: 1. Does Kota already have access to tree walking/water walking having taken Chakra Control as a skill? 2. How small is his chakra pool compared to someone like say, genin exam canon Sakura as a bench mark?
Vanathor
2022-11-15 21:41:36 +0000 UTCMost popular work per month gets focus, at least on chapter a week. I’ll either do another chapter of the popular project or dip into the runners up after that. Expect 2/3 updates per week total.
Slayer Anderson
2022-11-15 21:15:16 +0000 UTCWhat is the usual schedule of your chapters?
El_S
2022-11-15 19:01:29 +0000 UTCWelp, there goes any possibility of anonymity.... welcome to clan politics, for better or for worse haha.
Jake V
2022-11-15 02:25:40 +0000 UTCNot why I subbed, but why I renewed. The more of Industrious the better. Its become my heroin.
Vanathor
2022-11-15 01:46:26 +0000 UTCThis story is why I subbed. Not enough II stories out there.
Hadrian512
2022-11-15 00:09:31 +0000 UTCAnd it has the advantage of being impossibile to kill him or kidnap him without the important people know it
El_S
2022-11-14 20:07:53 +0000 UTCThese fights in front of several influential and highly ranked ninjas might work counter to Kota's interests here. If his talents get widely enough known, he might just unilaterally get voluntold to reenroll into the Academy, as Itachi worried about Fugaku forcing the issue if he discovered the breadth of Kota's skills. Though on the flip side, *because* of that attention, his early calculus of getting relegated to the Legion of Mediocre Ninja/Genin Corps would never happen. He would be basically assured a place on a Three Man Squad with a jounin instructor as someone known to have a lot of talent.
Vanathor
2022-11-14 20:03:57 +0000 UTCSo femsuke and babeuto are prolly gonna be on the same team again. But what about sakura? (what ABOUT sakura?)
Doggi
2022-11-14 16:18:50 +0000 UTCchapter 11 is great! loved reading it.
AudasViator
2022-11-14 15:10:12 +0000 UTCFixed. The patreon blurb box doesn't want to take it, though.
Slayer Anderson
2022-11-14 14:35:38 +0000 UTCIt's Chapter not Chpater
GreekGuy
2022-11-14 14:30:22 +0000 UTCThank you for breaking it up.
thevolunteer
2022-11-14 14:03:41 +0000 UTC
