I liked the idea of the quest, but I didn't like the initial prompt.
So have a rewrite. I like this one a lot better and I'm probably going to run with it tomorrow on SV. It'll be marked as a 'mature' thread.
This isn't intended to replace Semper or anything, just exploring something new. The quest is, as I think I said before, going to focus more on big-picture history and the potential historical changes created by the player characters.