This Romantic World Page 336
Added 2024-01-05 07:50:50 +0000 UTCAnd we're back with more TRW! :D
Having written scripts for both comics and a visual novel, I can say what defines comic dialog is that it has to be tight as hell by comparison. Between the desire to keep the pacing snappy and the physical confines of limited space on the page, there truly isn't room for a single wasted word.
This wasn't anything I didn't already know, but MAN has that concept just been drilled into my forehead while attempting to juggle so many characters in one scene. Hopefully it will come together well in the end here. In the meantime please let me know what you think of the page and how things are coming along!
Comments
Possibly! XD
Reinbach
2024-01-08 02:20:01 +0000 UTCThank you!
Reinbach
2024-01-08 02:19:52 +0000 UTCI'll take it! :)
Reinbach
2024-01-08 02:19:47 +0000 UTCStay tuned if you would! ;D
Reinbach
2024-01-08 02:19:39 +0000 UTCYou won't be waiting quite that long! :D
Reinbach
2024-01-08 02:19:29 +0000 UTCThat is the aim here, yes! Ellie takes longer to warm up than the average porn character. XD
Reinbach
2024-01-08 02:19:04 +0000 UTCLove it. XD
Reinbach
2024-01-08 02:17:57 +0000 UTCHey thanks for noticing! I do my bets to punch-up/simplify shapes in long distance shots. :)
Reinbach
2024-01-08 02:17:47 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2024-01-08 02:16:55 +0000 UTC:)
Reinbach
2024-01-08 02:16:51 +0000 UTC;D
Reinbach
2024-01-08 02:16:45 +0000 UTCThat shaved head girl is super hot, and Eliana is gonna explode from horny here
Alejandro Garcia
2024-01-06 09:12:32 +0000 UTCWe're back! A very fun page. Morgan's face in the last panel is amazing
llCDll
2024-01-06 02:10:18 +0000 UTCStrip clubs have never really been my thing, but I am HERE for Elianna's reactions
HungryOuroboros
2024-01-05 22:36:25 +0000 UTCLapdances are a great cure for depression. Who's the new girl? And do we get to see her ease Morgan's pain with those giant boobs?
Slaughterbug
2024-01-05 16:21:03 +0000 UTCAnnnnd Jane Strikes Again! GO JANE! I guess it's time for Bria to have a talk with Royce? I would guess Casey is still "indisposed" at the moment. Finally, I love the "Big Hurt Eyes" on Morgan (at least, that's what I think they are). Welcome Back, and as always, I can't wait for next week!
Chris Davis
2024-01-05 13:25:13 +0000 UTCI wonder if all that pent up sexually tension will make her burst out her clothes, like the Hulk.
The Funny Hatter
2024-01-05 12:56:39 +0000 UTCIntriguing. First of all, first time we've seen a butch bald girl. Kudos, love the tape over nipples and the whole look. Also, some things start to make sense now. What excites Eli is proper pacing. Girl needs foreplay. Slowness. Buildup. She has a bad reaction mostly to sex that gets down to brass tacks too quickly. Makes almost too much sense.
GregD
2024-01-05 10:30:58 +0000 UTCEllie is horny, but she's trying hard to act like she's not horny, which only makes her seem even more horny.
Squid Hills
2024-01-05 08:54:19 +0000 UTCYeah I think the only way around the tightness of the dialogue is random stuff like "Walls of Text" (Something*Positive would frequently put whole damn ESSAYS on one panel), which tend to look ugly and obscure the art... in that case you'd probably be able to get away with 2 comics a day cuz of the space saved on art, but it's weird for a porn comic to drop word-bombs like that XD also... god dang- "your arms are very toned!". I see the situation has warped Elianna's sense of decorum and caused her to just spout off whatever she's thinking. And thus she's said maybe the first thing about a person's appearance in the whole strip thus far! Also again DANG Holly's hips in the top right corner. Interesting how even with the big outlines and comparatively less detail than a "full figure drawing" their shapes are easily read and can look hot.
ScuzzBucket
2024-01-05 08:18:00 +0000 UTCRemember folks, you can always turn down a stripper and forget they exist 30 seconds later. You deserve a stripper that has hair. It’s practically a civil right.
ShadowSkill
2024-01-05 08:17:07 +0000 UTCI'm curious to see where this will lead Elianna
alex baker
2024-01-05 08:02:46 +0000 UTCCan't wait to see what lap dances are like in TRW!
Daniel
2024-01-05 07:57:02 +0000 UTC
