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EDIT: Shrank Elianna and added some bystanders to maker her look less like she was hovering above the club. 

Elianna is true to her word! But how long will she last once inside? :O

I don't have a lot else to add on this one, other than that Liz's dialog in panel three is meant to be a subtle reminder that Morgan has a history of being one of the few cast members that can rub Liz the wrong way. Also Bria's breasts are photobombing the composition there and that cracks me up.

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"Recently" in this case meaning May 13 2022. Super hot scene I've revisited a few times, for sure. I can't complain, I know that quality work takes time. Story-wise I guess it's been a couple of days?

Jack

We'll let you get away with the text tone, but if someone rings it better be ludicrous XD

Axel Foley

;D

Reinbach

She wanted to be a dom, but recently discovered she's the biggest sub who ever lived. XD

Reinbach

It has admittedly been awhile! XD

Reinbach

Well on Warren's end, I believe I chalked it up to him being close enough with Morgan that he knows when she gets like this he may as well be talking to a brick wall. He sent the girls here to try and get through to her in a way that he couldn't.

Reinbach

Stay tuned if you would then! ;D

Reinbach

Thank you! :)

Reinbach

I did waffle on that a bit. I decided both Morgan AND Liz couldn't have quirky tones or it might not be clear just what the sounds were even supposed to be. In the end Morgan won out. XD

Reinbach

Hope you like how it plays out! :)

Reinbach

You KNOW she's got some 40k figures in there too. XD

Reinbach

We shall see! :D

Reinbach

I actually made some tweaks to the last panel based on your feedback. Thanks for bringing that to my attention! :)

Reinbach

Well put! :)

Reinbach

Correct! Bria is intended to already know, the question is how long will she keep it a secret! :O

Reinbach

Honestly the first thing I noticed is how oddly apt Bria’s top is for her now, and for maternity wear. I am very much looking forward to watching Elliana succumbing to lust, and becoming a slutty gyaru 🤤

Vylon Delta

I forget why she's suddenly in this slump tbh xd

Deano

I had completely forgotten that was a thing.

Jon

Looking forward to seeing Elliana. I'm surprised that Morgan took the fact that Warren had told Liz and Bria so well. I'm also dissapointed that Warren isn't there for 2 reasons. 1) its what a good friend would do and 2) he's not going to be involved if any sexy times happen. The guy deserves another win after Bria screwed him over.

Colin Zeal

It appears Morgan is sticking her own chest out to compete in panel 3. And yes, no competition with Bria photobombing the panels she graces. I hope Elliana realizes the “professionals” are highly inadequate, and shows them all how it’s done.

Dorcas

I love Eli cause she's a straight shooter and adorable

Epocseer

The most unbelievable part of this entire series is that Liz's phone has the default ping for text messages.

Axel Foley

The ring tones are a great touch. Love that Morgan's is the Wilhelm scream. But at long last, we get to see this happen. Can't wait for next week's page.

Slaughterbug

Of course Liz would carry around emergency pokemon cards.

HungryOuroboros

Ellianna I imagine will last remarkably long in a strip club, given it's a place of adult professionals being paid to do this, over a school of near supernaturally horny "teens"

Taylored Printers

I love the different alert tones the girls have :) I can't wait for next week to see what happens! I think you're doing a great job with pacing, Rein! I'm not sure what a "Toxic Introvert" is, but I'm sure Morgan is certainly the right character to be it. Finally, is Elianna on the roof or just the entrance?

Chris Davis

Love the different ring tones on the girls' phones. Also love Liz's face in panel 6. Morgan delaying her descent into basement-dwelling inceldom to watch what everyone must assume is going to be the biggest train wreck since the ending of Bridge on the River Kwai shows that she secretly wants to be saved from her torment.

Squid Hills

From contextual clues we've seen in the last few Bria pages, she found out some time recently (off camera). I'd reckon it would be a while before she starts showing, as she's probably less than 6 weeks along now.

Squid Hills

This story is wonderful but when does Bria find out she's pregnant? For that matter when does she start showing?

Robert A. Ruelas


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