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Added 2023-03-17 03:10:46 +0000 UTCSecond-ever spread in the comic to kick off the scene! I have a lot of random thoughts about this set up, but I'll try not to ramble. One thing that occurs to me is that Lydia, Jane, and Parker are implied to be a trio of besties in the visual novel, but it was almost 300 pages of the comic before I've finally managed to show them doing anything together. This also marks the first time in the comic where Jane is actually having penetrative sex, and even I'm surprised that didn't happen sooner. Also here's Vincent! Remember him?....No?
In any case I hope you guys like the spread, big compositions like this scare me. I like how it turned out, though Douglas's maroon Castlewood sweatshirt combined with he and Jane being dead center kind of make it seem like they're the stars of the page. In hindsight I should have put Lydia and Vincent in the middle, but there's no going back now! XD
Comments
Thank you!
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:48:45 +0000 UTCHey thanks! That's good to hear. :)
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:48:39 +0000 UTCYou mean a text free version? Not in this case, I'm afraid. As I don't think I was diligent enough to refine the backgrounds in the space covered by the bubbles. But I'll keep that in mind, that people might be interested in no-text versions in the future.
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:48:25 +0000 UTCHey thanks! Knowing this cast they shouldn't be that hard to work in. XD
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:47:04 +0000 UTCThanks! :)
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:46:39 +0000 UTCI'm not seeing any problems on my end, is it working now? If not send me a PM and I'll get you this high res version another way.
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:46:25 +0000 UTCInteresting! For me that was just a date she was asking out on to prompt him into snub mode and cause her little breakdown. But if I can come up with a way to build a scene around it, a Trish/Mary concert could pop up in the future.
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:45:16 +0000 UTCGreat! More on the way! :)
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:43:30 +0000 UTCWell not on purpose, I generally don't fade one character into the background in favor of another. And especially in Jane and Millie's case I think they have some very different personality traits that keep them distinct enough from each other to not have to compete even if I did. XD
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:42:54 +0000 UTCIt has been way too long for sure! But I'm glad to finally get this relationship established in the main comic.
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:41:23 +0000 UTCThis is an important scene to the story, but as for having a big moment actually land on page 300, well, it might, but I didn't pull it off on page 100 or 200 so I don't see why I'd be able to this time. XD
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:38:18 +0000 UTCGreat! :)
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:37:15 +0000 UTCThank you!
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:37:09 +0000 UTCWell I know it's not a conscious thing I do, but I guess it varies from scene to scene depending on the context. In this case, they're all wearing shirts because I thought it would be fitting/amusing for the other guys to have clothes with graphics on them while Isaac has a plain white t.
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:37:02 +0000 UTCGood to know! Sweetness is definitely what I was going for with Parker. :)
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:34:52 +0000 UTCThat they do! :)
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:34:03 +0000 UTCMaybe he thought he and Parker could band together for protection! XD
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:33:56 +0000 UTCHey awesome! :)
Reinbach
2023-03-20 19:33:37 +0000 UTCGreat work on the spread!
NKL
2023-03-20 05:52:18 +0000 UTCEliana does have a point honestly; all the casual sex has made actual intimacy more rare. It's pretty great for us, but honestly I think her argument has real merit. Her methods, on the other hand...
HungryOuroboros
2023-03-17 19:41:41 +0000 UTCExcellent double page spread, Reinbach! Also, I can see how you feel about the composition, but I'll argue that by putting Lydia nearest to the foreground, it's relatively clear that she's the center of the current plot. I didn't get any dissonance from reading the crawler's monologue and comparing it against the layout
Emmett
2023-03-17 19:32:31 +0000 UTCDo you by chance have a version with just the "outdoor activities" in frame? This looks amazingly done.
Deita
2023-03-17 15:36:34 +0000 UTCHoly shit, this is hot. You should absolutely draw more big orgy spreads! (Time and such permitting, of course).
A Guy
2023-03-17 11:50:14 +0000 UTCLove the band shirt :D
Lukas West
2023-03-17 11:18:27 +0000 UTCIs it just my computer or is there something wrong with the size of the jpg, Mr. R? It's opening up too small at 100% and I can't read the dialog. Happy if it's my screw-up but...?
Alex Barton
2023-03-17 10:13:29 +0000 UTCNice, but I was looking forward to the concert.
Sir Kev The Perv
2023-03-17 09:44:41 +0000 UTCThis is great! Lydia, Jane, Parker together in one scene, Excellence! I do love that parker is standing on something to illustrate how small she is, comedy gold. Big taunty Jane getting plowed silly is 10/10. Love seeing the mouthy girls getting railed into submission. Lydia got something to prove, curious to were that leads. Jane in this page is my favorite. 😎🤘🏿👍🏿
Jariah Synn
2023-03-17 07:36:37 +0000 UTCI am playing the 1.5 hotfix version with the saves you provided. Looking forward to the final version in the future. Will let you know if I run into issues with this hotfix version.
Blueno
2023-03-17 07:16:54 +0000 UTCDon't worry, you aren't missing any pages. It's two at once because it's a spread. Also the last hotfix should be totally beatable as long as you aren't using an old save, but you can always wait for the final build coming up soon if you prefer. And as for this scene, it's not tied to the game, so far. It's comic info only. :)
Reinbach
2023-03-17 07:03:47 +0000 UTCMissing one of the pages in this post. Also kinda regretting not beating the final version of the game. Last build had bugs preventing me from beating it. Maybe the latest version of the game explains more of the plot in the comic now?
Blueno
2023-03-17 06:59:01 +0000 UTCY'know, I never really noticed that much, but it's 100 times easier to draw, lol. I should start doing that!
ScuzzBucket
2023-03-17 06:57:15 +0000 UTCYeah I like how she's looking up at Isaac so lovingly. She's not just fucking- she's actually WITH someone.
ScuzzBucket
2023-03-17 06:55:53 +0000 UTCWOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! A huge spread! Yeah, this would terrify me as an artist. The composition is complicated and you have all the different sizes of people to deal with, plus you try to avoid "SameBody" and all three women are ESPECIALLY different. I'm REALLY digging all the body shapes here, with Jane's big udders swinging backwards (that's hard to draw- looks great here!), and Lydia's lean body and her & Parker's substantial, yet perky tits flying about. It is pretty funny that the trio of friends have only just now appeared all at once- they did in the "Test Game" you did but otherwise there's been very little interaction between them. It mostly seems amusing to me because when you first started hyping your new comic, you posted the trio first so I assumed they'd be the main characters and everything would revolve around them XD. That's especially amusing because Jane hasn't appeared since the "Morgan blowjob" chapter from like 2 years ago and like you said, hasn't done anything more than blow Douglas that one time. I was always surprised she didn't show up more, but I guess Millie stole her "Curvy Girl" thunder HARD.
ScuzzBucket
2023-03-17 05:59:14 +0000 UTCGoing straight from a scene with Millie to one with Jane, man this chapter is starting to feel like fanservice for me. Also, looking back at it we've only ever seen the three them together in the original demo for the game with conversation mentions throughout the actual game.
TheFirstSword
2023-03-17 05:36:48 +0000 UTCAlso great job on the boob sway. Hope we get something special for the big 300
alex baker
2023-03-17 04:00:06 +0000 UTCI really love the spread
alex baker
2023-03-17 03:58:39 +0000 UTCGroup sex is good stuff. Nom.
GregD
2023-03-17 03:20:13 +0000 UTCOh my god this spread is amazing.
Merjia
2023-03-17 03:18:29 +0000 UTCDo men in this universe not like having sex completely naked? It always seems like they are wearing a shirt, or something?
Vylon Delta
2023-03-17 03:16:47 +0000 UTCJane should always be the center of attention, I see nothing wrong here. Also Parker looks very sweet here, I'm not sure what it is but it really captures some of the qualities that separate her from the rest of the cast.
HungryOuroboros
2023-03-17 03:14:38 +0000 UTCLove how Parker is standing on a pillow. Short girls find a way.
Squid Hills
2023-03-17 03:13:25 +0000 UTCHow on earth was isaac convinced to go camping with Jane?! That's a disaster for him waiting to happen!
MaximumHavoc
2023-03-17 03:13:03 +0000 UTCThis might be my new favorite page not involving Abbey.
Licorice Lain
2023-03-17 03:12:56 +0000 UTC
