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This Romantic World Page 258

As quite a talky page, I feel the content says it all and there isn't much I have to go on about in this space. I will say that Elianna's takedown here describes over half the movie reviewers I follow online. XD

This Romantic World Page 258

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Hey I totally missed this one somehow. Here's what I would have said: Thanks! :)

Reinbach

Thank you! :)

Reinbach

Dude your writing is soo freaking good! I can hear the characters voices. Like down to the cadence that's wild.

AlienBrain

Elianna is really beautiful in this one. Keep up the good work.

eF..cz

Yeah. It's not as if you have 3d models you can just line up in front of a chart. You have to make the entire thing from scratch. Maybe you could just add one character at a time when you feel like it, and eventually it'll be complete.

MaximumHavoc

Not on purpose? He's always been small as far as I can remember.

Reinbach

Glad she's working for you! :)

Reinbach

I've tried to get through one of those in the past, and I never make it. I just get bored and have an overwhelming urge to work on something that has a deadline looming instead. But never say never, I'll have much more time to work with when the game is complete.

Reinbach

Can we get a height chart/linup of the characters in TRW? I'd be interested to see how they all compare.

MaximumHavoc

God, Elianna is so damn sexy: those huge boobs, her glorious curvy figure, the fire in her eyes. Derek has to take one look and spring instant wood, whatever she might claim that she's sexually incorruptible...

Alex Barton

Did Kayden shrink in the wash? I'm pretty sure he's tumble-dry only.

Squid Hills

It's scandalous

MaximumHavoc

XD

Reinbach

If only there were some milfs nearby! XD

Reinbach

;D

Reinbach

;D

Reinbach

Still an admirable ambition! XD

Reinbach

Stay tuned if you would! :)

Reinbach

Thanks dude!

Reinbach

Thanks!

Reinbach

:O

Reinbach

I imagine Derek as the type that doesn't mind criticism at all, so long as it's constructive. In truth he's actually kinda charmed here that she gave all of his work a fair shot even though she clearly wasn't a fan.

Reinbach

That jacket is doing some padding here. XD

Reinbach

That's great to hear! :)

Reinbach

:O

Reinbach

I fall into this trap, of course. I often think movies aren't as good as they used to be. But I think I should also try and step outside myself and recognize that a lot of my perception probably has to do with nostalgia, and that I saw these old movies at a time in my life when I was 100% more susceptible to being blown away by my entertainment choices and had zero cynical baggage weighing down the fun. It's entirely possible that modern movies are objectively better in every way, and I'm just incapable of perceiving this truth at my age. XD

Reinbach

XD

Reinbach

XD

Reinbach

Hang in there if you would! :)

Reinbach

Not going after anyone in particular! XD

Reinbach

I hope so! :)

Reinbach

:O

Reinbach

He's much shorter and she's pretty tall, so a little of both!

Reinbach

I hope! :)

Reinbach

"Wait..." *proceeds to walk up to her, and gorges all of the cookies ravenously without breaking eye contact*

The Funny Hatter

gonna need some milk for them cookies

mega

Breeding Kayden (who is male) might be a bit of a challenge.

Nicholas Grey

Well while not automatically, they usually are. Old movies just had fun. No need to pander or anything, good clean fun imo. Generally the older movies are better than the newer remakes or sequels except probably Top Gun: Maverick. Same applies to games. Entertainment should focus on entertaining people rather than trying to send a message.

Shitlords

I don't necessarily know what's happening next. Pretty sure its noy sex. But I predict Elianna's going to have some more soaked panties by the end.

GregD

That's because he has an expression other than a grimace. It makes his face softer.

GregD

We must follow the same movie reviewers. And I sense wholesomeness incoming…

rah

If I was Derek; I'd lock the door and attempt to breed them both before bad luck struck again. ...on principle and to 'deepen' friendships.

Thatoneguy85

Could it be that my long ago request is coming true? Are we soon to get an DerekxEliana with a splash of Kaden?

Hunter_of_the_HandCocks

Ellie needs a hug stat! Awesome page. The extra details are just the icing on the cake :D

kaldonis

...it couldn't be... Eli- a succubus?? SHE'S FEEDING OFF HIS LIFE FORCE!

nick

It’s interesting -and unusual!- to note that Derek doesn’t immediately react defensively to that. Many people would do so automatically.

KnightRider007

Oh just hug her Derek ❤️ also I love those “no horny” badges 😂

Merjia

I DEMAND FILTHY HAND PLAY.

FoolyMagooly

Derek got skinnier but Eli's tits got fatter.

Kudos707

Go to Sabudenego's Patreon if you want to see FILTH, blast you!

ScuzzBucket

Aw, Elianna's such a pretty giant in those panels (lol I like smol characters because then other girls look like giantesses!) and I feel bad for her, yet also find her straight-up derogatory review of Derek's blog funny. Man, they all DO be like that, don't they? Derek does seem quite a bit handsomer here, somehow. Can't put my finger on why, but you said you'd been editing him in the game.

ScuzzBucket

damn, she busty

Licorice Lain

The writing in this page is REALLY fuggin' good. Had me laughing and intrigued; Really grabbing the plot by reins here. I can feel it!

Blueno

Is this... Is this a slowly developing romantic relationship that doesn't involve sex? Is that even allowed in Castlewood?

MaximumHavoc

Yeah, I do get tired of people who seem to have this notion that something being old automatically makes it better.

Lord Washington

So that's how she comforts herself when her anti-sex schemes fail.... and I guess all the comfort food goes strait to her boobs...

Slaughterbug

Considering how this series started I really can't feel bad for her. 🤣

Jariah Synn

Decent writing can be found in all kinds of smutty works. Archive of our own is a testament to that

alex baker

I honestly feel bad for Elianna here, what have you done to me Rein?

TheHelixFossil

.........I feel called out. Goddamn Elianna.

Mr. Bug

Character development for Derek and Elianna in the same page? This is gonna be awesome.

Abundance of Radishes

Come on Derek... seal the deal. Get that hand hold!

FoolyMagooly

I forget, is Kayden actually that much shorter, or was she on a literal soapbox?

Darryl Williams

Well, this oughta be interesting.

Daniel S


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