This Romantic World Page 171
Added 2021-01-08 02:08:00 +0000 UTCScene complete! This was a big one and it feels good to finish. I hope you guys enjoyed it in spite of the last-minute story stitching I had to do when I wrote myself into a corner a couple of months ago. I think it worked out well in the end. It certainly made Chloe's comic debut happen sooner than it would have, and that's a plus for me.
Speaking of which: Chloe! I like to think the big bullet points about her are made clear in this page and the last one, those being that she's Isaac's stepsister and best friend, and that she obviously likes spying on people. Like Isaac, she was created for the TRW prequel VN, so if you've played that you already know all about her. I say this because I'm attempting a bit of a balancing act here: on one hand, I want to build on the characters and stories introduced in the game. But on the other, I don't want to make a comic that confuses readers who aren't interested in visual novels or just want to wait until the game is done to play it.
As always, let me know how I'm doing as I go if you would!
Comments
I did hear some of that on Discord as well. For now I guess it comes down to what I personally think the TRW game is about (or not about) and on my end I didn't consider this a spoiler. But there's not much more I can say in the meantime without spoiling things for real. I'll be ready to reopen this discussion when the game is done for sure.
Reinbach
2021-01-14 01:35:20 +0000 UTCNGL this kinda ruins the game. From the game it is much more obvious that isaac and chloe love each other, than isaac loves parker
Jake
2021-01-14 00:13:10 +0000 UTC;D
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:23:30 +0000 UTCNot at present! XD
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:23:23 +0000 UTCThe theme of the comic leans towards cuteness in general I would hope. :)
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:23:14 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:22:52 +0000 UTCGreat! :)
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:22:48 +0000 UTCYou may not have been wrong exactly, it will come up later in the chapter.
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:22:36 +0000 UTC:)
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:21:35 +0000 UTCAs ever! XD
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:21:30 +0000 UTCShe does, in my head anyway. That's why the first thing she thought of was Chloe after they kissed here.
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:21:21 +0000 UTCThanks!
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:20:38 +0000 UTCFor sure! It will come up!
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:20:28 +0000 UTCThank you!
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:20:13 +0000 UTCIt would seem so! XD
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:20:03 +0000 UTCHey thanks for the thoughtful feedback! I hope not to disappoint as I go along with the story. :)
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:19:52 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:18:48 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:18:43 +0000 UTCThat is the way love triangles tend to drift in a porn world I imagine! :)
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:18:28 +0000 UTCThat will be answered when we see Chloe again later in the chapter. :)
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:17:52 +0000 UTCPink! XD
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:17:27 +0000 UTCNoted! :)
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:17:20 +0000 UTCGreat! :)
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:17:14 +0000 UTCHope to keep you interested! :)
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:17:02 +0000 UTCgreat!
Reinbach
2021-01-11 13:16:45 +0000 UTCOh boy :p Can`t wait to see Chloe and Parker face off for Issac`s love.
Lukas West
2021-01-10 20:23:36 +0000 UTCPlot twist: she wasnβt happy.
Kalandros
2021-01-10 09:21:19 +0000 UTCjealous chloe looks kinda hot. i wonder what kind of things she will do now. let's hope they're not sinister, but instead hold a kind of cuteness that makes us love her more!
nick
2021-01-10 03:55:28 +0000 UTCoh no π€£
adam
2021-01-08 18:41:19 +0000 UTCAn interesting situation (Black Books quote :) ). Can't wait for more.
eF..cz
2021-01-08 16:08:23 +0000 UTCHmm, I guess I was wrong on the whole "Chole approves of Parker" thing. Still, I get the feeling that it's not that Chloe wants Issac for herself, more than she doesn't want to be replaced as his "best friend. I think it's time Chlole gets with a certain Class President's Side-kick...
Chris Davis
2021-01-08 15:09:08 +0000 UTCOh hell yes, lets get some chloe!
Vince
2021-01-08 06:54:57 +0000 UTCThey certainly do be crazy.
Malmedee
2021-01-08 05:12:00 +0000 UTCI wonder if Parker knows Issac has banged his sepsis a few times...
Slaughterbug
2021-01-08 05:02:01 +0000 UTCStepsis can some nice cake
Kudos707
2021-01-08 04:44:23 +0000 UTCMy interpretation of Chloe and Isaac's relationship in the game was that it became romantic given that they're already best friends who were attracted to one another. I guess I'll see if she felt the same way lol
Deano
2021-01-08 04:16:11 +0000 UTCEven if it's not my preferred ship, this feels 100% real and believable. As always, your characters feel like real people, and it makes for great reading!
HungryOuroboros
2021-01-08 03:48:20 +0000 UTCI'm so happy for Isaac and Parker!! ^^ But at the same time... Poor Chloe T.T I just hope that there is nothing that a good time in the sack between them won't fix, in a very Romantic World way, after all, even if I (and others, of course) like Parker for Isaac, he and Chloe still have a very deep and personal bond, and not only just because they sleep with each other, I mean, as Isaac says in this page they are practically best friends and have allways been there for each other. And then, just when the three of them fix things after a really hot threesome (I hope xD) enters Chloe's mother. I'd really love seeing that, but that's just how I'd envision the situation playing out. I'm already highly anticipating the resolution of Isaac's conundrum. And don't worry Reinbach, even though I'm no professional or anything of that kind in the world of writting, I'm still quite picky about details and logical development, and even though I'm not a huge fan of the whole "despite we like/love each other we fuck with almost whomever", I still think that you deliver a very well developed and nicely written story, not only enjoyable due to your art style, but also thank to the own story. So don't worry and keep up the good work, I for one am definitively enjoy it all, both the comics and the game.
Daresouma
2021-01-08 03:39:42 +0000 UTCThink again Issac, Chloe has a green eyed monster living inside that you just released big time. XD
Bob Fink
2021-01-08 03:20:10 +0000 UTCI can already hear the shovel hitting the dirt...
Jariah Synn
2021-01-08 03:14:38 +0000 UTCIf you think the people in this story doesn't know everything there is to know about copious amounts of bodily fluids and how to.. dispose of them, I don't know what to tell you :D
rah
2021-01-08 02:54:13 +0000 UTCHopelessly in love, but in a "retarded for each other" kinda way.
Johnny Wishbone
2021-01-08 02:53:42 +0000 UTCThat chick is in the habit of taking group cum baths. Before you put your mouth on her I hope he watched her brunch, mouthwash, and scrub her face first.
ShadowSkill
2021-01-08 02:48:03 +0000 UTCI also hope this ends up being the start of a poly relationship.
MAR
2021-01-08 02:36:38 +0000 UTCThanks!
Reinbach
2021-01-08 02:36:09 +0000 UTCBased on the game I would completely agree, but you never know. I think it could swing any way
Wendsl
2021-01-08 02:35:23 +0000 UTCFor what it's worth the game is planned to have multiple endings as of this writing, and which one was canonical won't revealed in the comic for a looooong time.
Reinbach
2021-01-08 02:35:00 +0000 UTCLove I believe, but havenβt played the game in a while.
MAR
2021-01-08 02:34:06 +0000 UTCIs Chloe in love with Isaac, or just possessive?
Wendsl
2021-01-08 02:32:16 +0000 UTCWhat's the color for jealousy?
The Funny Hatter
2021-01-08 02:28:09 +0000 UTC10/10 great cliffhanger
KainRezo072
2021-01-08 02:16:30 +0000 UTCIt feels a little weird seeing all this while the game is still going on. Kinda like seeing the epilogue to a story before the ending.
Angelo
2021-01-08 02:13:34 +0000 UTCi would gladly take chole over parker
alex baker
2021-01-08 02:13:28 +0000 UTCOk so Chloe isnt exactly pleased, shes a nice girl at heart though I expect her to take it out on Parker in the bedroom. Also I wouldnt be shocked if Parker is into it and gets attached. These three are my new 0t3 lol. Cant wait to see what happens.
Malcolm Tent
2021-01-08 02:13:05 +0000 UTCYep. Yep. Yeeeeeaaap. Saw this coming a mile away. Like, the second I saw the camera, I suspected it was her. But I also knew she would *not* be happy. Good lord, the drama. (This is not me complaining!)
GregD
2021-01-08 02:11:27 +0000 UTCLooks like Rein got his groove back! I like the story progression so far
Blueno
2021-01-08 02:11:26 +0000 UTC
