This Romantic World Page 147 (Revised)
Added 2020-08-14 03:10:15 +0000 UTCEDIT: Well since posting this page publicly I've gotten some lengthy comments explaining how wrong my comic panel placement was on the original version. Right or wrong, one thing is clear: I confused enough readers to justify a revision, so here we are. I think this new version is a bit more cluttered to look at, but it should be easy to clearly follow the sequence now.
My thanks to everyone who commented on my previous post about the page running late! Hope the art looks ok, sometimes it's easy for me to miss mistakes in situations like this. If anything looks off let me know, and I'll make tweaks tomorrow.
As for the page itself, pretty straight-forward here I think lol. Abbey knows she's got Casey on the hook now, and is starting to get a little smug about it.
Comments
Still? The general consensus I got since the revision was that it was easier to follow now.
Reinbach
2020-08-24 13:56:51 +0000 UTCSo she takes them off, then puts them back on, right? Like a tease? That's how it reads to me (left to right). Anyway, we get the point, on to important things, like Casey-Abbey business time.
frank barry
2020-08-21 19:35:15 +0000 UTCGlad to hear it! :)
Reinbach
2020-08-16 02:27:08 +0000 UTCMay be! XD
Reinbach
2020-08-16 02:26:56 +0000 UTCThanks! I was really happy with how that came out myself. XD
Reinbach
2020-08-16 02:26:16 +0000 UTCGlad to hear this stood out to you! :)
Reinbach
2020-08-16 02:25:55 +0000 UTCAlso I fear that Royce wouldn't fit in her lol. XD
Reinbach
2020-08-16 02:25:38 +0000 UTCI'm not saying you'll never see her get banged by a guy, but she's all about Casey for now.
Reinbach
2020-08-16 02:25:08 +0000 UTCI think you're right! :)
Reinbach
2020-08-16 02:24:32 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2020-08-16 02:24:19 +0000 UTCStay tuned! :)
Reinbach
2020-08-16 02:24:15 +0000 UTCI got that intent on my second look, but initially I was confused by the layout too. Far from a serious problem, though. I kind of like when an unconventional layout asks me to look more thoughtfully at the page as a whole. A bit of friction in the reading process isn't the end of the world, I think
Emmett
2020-08-15 17:38:15 +0000 UTCAbbey's pretty not into men, and I'm good with that
Emmett
2020-08-15 17:36:05 +0000 UTCActually, what happened is that I read "I" as "You", so I thought Casey was trying to kick Abbey out of her own room.
Licorice Lain
2020-08-14 23:24:00 +0000 UTCI mean it. Been a fan since I first read “In the Kitchen”. Little sentimental towards that.
Pol McGee
2020-08-14 22:47:26 +0000 UTCNot at this point! XD
Reinbach
2020-08-14 22:34:40 +0000 UTCI changed it so Casey couldn't quite get out the word "leave" to make it more clear. :)
Reinbach
2020-08-14 22:34:25 +0000 UTCGreat! I hope to keep your interest then. :)
Reinbach
2020-08-14 22:33:46 +0000 UTCAwesome! :)
Reinbach
2020-08-14 22:33:16 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2020-08-14 22:33:09 +0000 UTC:D
Reinbach
2020-08-14 22:33:01 +0000 UTCThanks! That actually came from somewhere. There was this old hentai called Angels in the Court. There was this evil volleyball coach who had this hot teenage sidekick. He would always gesture wildly when he spoke and accidentally grope her, upon which she would make that Abbey face there and fall over. Fun stuff. XD
Reinbach
2020-08-14 22:07:31 +0000 UTCCasey has grown a lot so I hope she doesn't regress just for Abbey, but I do like Abbey's firm ass!
Kudos707
2020-08-14 19:08:51 +0000 UTCTo paraphrase a wise doctor, Abbey’s going to fuck around and turn (Casey) back to the old (Casey)!
rah
2020-08-14 11:56:56 +0000 UTCWe've hit all kinds of hurdles this week that I'll get into later, but expect the early test release for the higher tiers in the next couple days and the full release next week.
Reinbach
2020-08-14 09:59:02 +0000 UTCwhats the ETA on the next game update?
NSDB
2020-08-14 09:55:10 +0000 UTCSounds like what i was attempting visually here didn't exactly work. That bottom left panel is meant to be the final one. I was hoping that the reader's eye would be naturally drawn to panel three, and then Abbey's dialog would draw them into panel four and then the final one. Looks like i flubbed it if readers are confused I'm afraid.
Reinbach
2020-08-14 09:07:38 +0000 UTChaha, Abbey has such a cute little bum. Abbey's excited little "Hah!" from getting Casey to touch her boob is excellent, too.
ScuzzBucket
2020-08-14 08:19:24 +0000 UTCI love that first panel lol. Abbey's joyful reaction to Casey touching her breast is awesome.
Angelo
2020-08-14 07:37:51 +0000 UTCI am also confused by this. Not sure if it's a tease or the next strip will elaborate further.
Blueno
2020-08-14 07:32:12 +0000 UTCThis is a really nice page. Gorgeous art, and I really respect Abbey saying (not in so many words) "stop trying to protect me from myself and let's have the fun we both want!" I have been on both sides of that equation and it's eminently relatable.
Zachary Adams
2020-08-14 06:56:47 +0000 UTCCue porno music.
Slaughterbug
2020-08-14 05:51:18 +0000 UTCI love how abbey is teasing and playing around with Casey I do wonder how it’ll all end now
Daniel Reyes-Bukowski
2020-08-14 05:31:41 +0000 UTCI think Casey needs to introduce Abbey to Royce...
Chris Davis
2020-08-14 05:24:20 +0000 UTCAbbey knows how to push buttons.
GregD
2020-08-14 04:40:24 +0000 UTCI really don’t think Casey has a chance in hell of resisting Abbey. :D
Bob Fink
2020-08-14 04:22:38 +0000 UTCNevermind, I misread the text. Still was a funny though.
Licorice Lain
2020-08-14 03:23:13 +0000 UTCI have been really eager to see the continuation since the last page.
Fenix Feniks the sassy serpent
2020-08-14 03:22:26 +0000 UTC😳 Worth it
Pol McGee
2020-08-14 03:17:33 +0000 UTCBullet D- Nope that there's a machinegun! Casey can't dodge them all! Abbey going full @#$&!!!
Jariah Synn
2020-08-14 03:15:34 +0000 UTCoh lawd. i dont know how anyone could try to deny that. god damn
EpicMorgana32
2020-08-14 03:12:13 +0000 UTCWait did Abbey just pull her panties down to show of how wet she is only to pull them up to show off her ass? Abbey is not playing fair.
alex baker
2020-08-14 03:12:05 +0000 UTC
