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Added 2024-08-05 11:09:06 +0000 UTCWhat do you guys think about the recent video? Because it took me too long to make it, I can't rate it as a regular viewer. I'd appreciate any feedback. Write in the comments
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Sure, I'm happy to provide ideas or references. For chastity videos, many of the good ones I've seen had a prerequisite that you're locked for, let's say, one week. Then the bulk of the video is teasing and finally release. Alternatively, pleasuring oneself with the cage on is also an option using vibrators, tugging, etc. I've been in the Hentai JOI scene since it basically started, back when it was essentially a PowerPoint presentation lol I've seen a lot. Feel free to message me if you want to bounce ideas off someone, or check grammar. I used to teach it, so I'd like to think I'm good. Anyway, nice video!
Ajax1224
2024-08-10 02:02:15 +0000 UTCThanks for the long feedback. Next time i'll make text faster. About chastity. I don't know how to implement this in video. If you just make the viewer watch and not touch yourself, i think it will be boring, but you can give me ideas. I already thought about it and made instead of a cage on you, there is a protective layer on her, so you can't physically penetrate. That's some alternative. About the pose. You can send me a reference in messages. When I have suitable scene, I'll add it
PurPurPur
2024-08-10 01:51:46 +0000 UTCThe surprise quickshot bit at the end was great. Only downside is that I won't feel that rush again like I did this time. And like crown, I like when she's uncensored out in public and everyone can see except me. My only complaints or criticisms for the video would be that sometimes it felt like the text took too long to show up, like it was very drawn out sometimes. I think varying the message frequency if you do this kind of video again would go a long way in making it more immersive. Also, personally I would've loved to see a censored picture of her (eyes and breasts, maybe pussy too) where she had a dick in each hand and one in her mouth. It's a personal favorite of mine lol I hope at some point in the series you explore Chasity a little bit too, just something I'd like to see!
Ajax1224
2024-08-10 00:52:25 +0000 UTCThanks. Your comments motivate me every time ๐๐๐
PurPurPur
2024-08-06 00:56:33 +0000 UTCThe censorship is great, especially at the start since I prefer pixels :p. I like the story with her censoring the phone and sending the pics too. Anytime she's out in public for others to see is great too. I like the development of this character ๐
Crown
2024-08-06 00:51:05 +0000 UTCYeah, i'm not a native english speaker. That's why most of the time is spent on the text. I hope grammar issues are not too annoying? and about the chest, in part 2 it was bigger on the contrary. I haven't fully formed my style yet, so trying different proportions. Thanks for sharing. I've just been upset because I think the last video was bad
PurPurPur
2024-08-06 00:26:36 +0000 UTCwell, in the first image she did look like she suddenly had bigger chesticles, which i do personally prefer to be honest. other than that theres just a few grammar issues here and there (i assume youre a non native english speaker?). but all in all i think its great work, i do really like having just a series with one specific character, unlike how others usually just do random characters from anime
Reclusive Raiders
2024-08-05 23:05:03 +0000 UTC
