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Added 2017-03-03 05:36:48 +0000 UTCThe downside of skipping ahead a few months in your story's timeline is that you're going to have to explain just what's been going on in the missing time. Exposition like that can be a tricky thing to write, for me anyway. As it's all too easy to fall into the "As you know, Bob" trap where your characters are standing around spouting information about things they should both already know.
So I did my best to keep things short and to the point with Bria's monologue here. I suppose there's more she could have gone into, like just how she ended up part of her teacher's expanding student harem, but I'm hoping readers would piece together that Casey brought her in to that particular fold. If not I can have her mention it a little later on. Hope you guys like the page! :)
Comments
Being young doesn't give Jonah a pass for being an asshole. He was a way bigger jerk than Mr. Fontaine. He was pressuring Bria into sex even when she said no. We haven't even seen enough of Fontaine to call him an asshole. He's a narcissist that loves to hear himself talk, thats about all we know about him so far. Yeah he's fucking his students, but this is a porn comic so who cares. Bria felt terrible about cheating on Warren but Casey helped her get closure with that. So now she's moving on but she still loves sex so she'll probably continue to sleep around. She loves sex, she loves the thrill of possibly being caught, and she loves when guys take charge. Her getting with Fontaine makes sense. You have to let go of this nice girl image of Bria, she kinda lost that title when she cheated.
Angelo
2017-03-05 18:56:17 +0000 UTCBoth Jonah and bria are young, they are impolsive and make mistakes... it's not the same thing. Bria is supposed to be somewhat a nice girl. After feeling terrible about what she did to warren and apologizing to him, plus admiing he missed him, she's just gonna go start fucking some grown ass asshole like fontaine... that makes sense to you... (I feel terrible for what I did so I'm gonna keep doing it with someone even worse...) yeah, I disagree. "If" she hadn't had that little scene with casey where she broke down crying about how terrible she felt, you would have had a point.
meiwow
2017-03-05 08:09:40 +0000 UTCKind of, yeah. Casey is the star after all, I intended Bria and especially Warren as supporting characters. Though in the final product Bria ended up with WAY more page time than I initially planned just because I ended up liking her so much. As for why I skipped over so much stuff with her and Warren, that was because if I hadn't, her story would have taken over the comic. I can only update once a week, and I didn't want a situation where readers would potentially go for months without even seeing the main character. Oh and as for Warren he'll be back in the next comic with a larger role.
Reinbach
2017-03-05 02:12:54 +0000 UTCSkipping ahead is ok, just risky if it jumps too far ahead. Also in the last page bria was hesitant to stay, what changed? Maybe a few cells infront of this page showing her playing hard to get but gives in?. Also will warren make an appearance? All i remember was a fight broke out and was not shown, and this apology and not shown. Or was he a character to build atmosphere only?
Danny
2017-03-04 22:31:13 +0000 UTCYou never thought that Bria would be the type of person to get involved with an asshole like Fontaine? Do you remember Jonah, the dude Bria cheated on Warren with? He was a huge asshole, way worse than Fontaine imo. It's already been established that Bria likes when men take control so its not out of character at all for her to be with Fontaine.
Angelo
2017-03-04 18:18:13 +0000 UTCIt was certainly my idea. The way I saw it, Bria was someone who wasn't ready to settle into an exclusive relationship, and she found that out the hard way. After a good amount of suffering on her part she's made amends with Warren and decided not let the mistake she made ruin her life. To me this is her learning to be in a good mood again after being depressed for so long. But hey, to each their own. My work isn't going to please everyone.
Reinbach
2017-03-04 05:18:29 +0000 UTCI don't know man, at first I was kinda light minded about it but now it has stuck with me and I got to say I don't like it one bit. Bria was always the nice girl, sure she made mistakes, slept around and hurt her boyfriend and when he left her she went into a depression or whatever and made some more mistakes. But you would think that after making peace with warren she would kinda go back to who she really was... but no, now even though she says she still misses warren... she's fucking this fucking jerk Fontaine? really? And he's all imposing and shit telling her to sit down after she tells him she needs to go. I understand Casey or those blue hair twins sleeping with him but i never thought bria would be the type of person to get involved with an asshole like fontaine. I don't know man, I'm not thrilled with where things are headed with this last chapter of the comic. Doesn't make sense to me. I don't know if somebody else influenced you into doing this or if it was your idea but i hate it. I'm sorry.
meiwow
2017-03-04 05:09:36 +0000 UTCThanks dude! :D
Reinbach
2017-03-04 04:08:09 +0000 UTCThat might be more than Royce could handle! XD
Reinbach
2017-03-04 04:07:32 +0000 UTCi hope we get a scene of bria, casey and Sylvia with royce.
alex baker
2017-03-03 23:58:14 +0000 UTCI actually wouldn't mind if you made a short series focusing on Mr. Fontaine and his various interactions with his harem
Angelo
2017-03-03 18:58:37 +0000 UTCBut in all seriousness, great job. This is a wonderful page...
MysteryStreet
2017-03-03 17:46:32 +0000 UTCGlad to hear it! I like the idea of Bria being very smiley when she has sex. :)
Reinbach
2017-03-03 16:32:24 +0000 UTCThis is a side of Bria I really like, the side that has released her inhibitions and just does what she enjoys and she really likes to fuck ;)
Bob Fink
2017-03-03 16:24:40 +0000 UTC:D
Reinbach
2017-03-03 16:14:59 +0000 UTCDon't taze me, bro! Don't taaaz..arghhh!!! X,x
MysteryStreet
2017-03-03 16:13:48 +0000 UTCSecurity? Please show this gentleman out.
Reinbach
2017-03-03 16:04:35 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback! Glad to know I conveyed what I was going for. Hope you like how the scene evolves in the coming pages. :)
Reinbach
2017-03-03 16:01:33 +0000 UTCI think you laid down the pieces for us to assemble very well, including Bria's signature MO of going from initial reluctance to reckless sexual abandon. Although I'd love to see one more page developing that particular transition (I can never have enough Bria), I can see that it would mess up the timing of the chapter, and this is the page that really needed focus, so all's well.
Bialge
2017-03-03 14:01:31 +0000 UTCOh shit! Mr. Fontane. I forgot about him. Seems like it's been ages since we've seen any non-teenage male characters. Isn't there another dude named Rice or something?
MysteryStreet
2017-03-03 12:26:40 +0000 UTCthat was my first impression, that he was responsible for the folded clothes. its HIS harem, and the girls want something from HIM, so, behave like a good girl, and you get his D! :) because if not: wayne, he has another one of you just around the corner ^^
Skooma Gnark
2017-03-03 12:21:22 +0000 UTCI'm with ScuzzBucket, please let Casey and Bria have a relationship (preferably open), the crazies deserve love as well. ;)
Walter L.
2017-03-03 11:59:39 +0000 UTCYeah, I don't mind when douchey guys bang Casey, but poor Bria seemed to deserve better. Though you're right- if you want your Commissions to be canon, then she kind of has to be "open". I guess her & Bria can have an open relationship... please let them have a relationship :).
ScuzzBucket
2017-03-03 10:18:36 +0000 UTCHey lots of douchy guys still get girls lol. As for Warren, he had a very small role in this story but he'll have a much more prominent one in the next comic. And yeah with Bria being such a major character, putting her in a monogamous relationship after she's learned how much misery cheating can bring just doesn't work for me. I need to keep her open for canonical commissions and just be free to write her in any scene I think is hot. Anyhow glad you like the page. :)
Reinbach
2017-03-03 09:51:59 +0000 UTCActually what I had in mind was that HE made her fold her clothes neatly. But I guess there's really no way to tell shown here. Either way works. I could easily see Bria as the type to fold them herself if she was instructed to strip.
Reinbach
2017-03-03 09:48:58 +0000 UTCHey you knew what kind of girl she was lol. XD
Reinbach
2017-03-03 09:46:50 +0000 UTCOh he will once they finish and things get back to the story. ;)
Reinbach
2017-03-03 09:46:02 +0000 UTCAgreed! :D
Reinbach
2017-03-03 09:45:27 +0000 UTCNice! :)
Reinbach
2017-03-03 09:45:16 +0000 UTCSo hot <3
Stush Cinta
2017-03-03 08:01:39 +0000 UTChaha, that IS funny. I get the impression that she just LOVES being pounded and bossed around in bed, but for all that eagerness, will still fold her clothes into perfect little piles before getting raw :).
ScuzzBucket
2017-03-03 07:06:39 +0000 UTCThis brings to mind many things for me: 1) OH MY GODDDDDDDD BRIA IS SO GORGEOUS!!! That sex pose with the big boobs swinging around... I LOVE how you draw curves and "substantial" women. Bria is just perfection. 2) I'm sad that this douche gets to bang all these hot chicks. I weep to see a borderline pedo get the hottest girls in the world despite being in a position of power over them, and never suffers for it. MAKE HIM SUFFER :). 3) I hope we get to see Warren's reaction, or at least hear how he responded. As the most sympathetic male of the Switchverse (seriously, his only crime was not being a controlling dick to his girlfriend, who never seems to have brought up her fetish to him). 4) I was kind of hoping for Bria to turn monogamous again after this debacle (given that it shattered her emotionally to be sleeping around), but of course that means LESS BRIA SEX, so I can see why that was not an option. And am thankful for it :). But with the teacher... :(. 5) The exposition seems fine, especially with the narration. Since she's stated her reasons for banging guys all over the place again, we can read between the lines as to why she's banging her teacher. I suppose I'm overthinking a porn comic where the answer to most things is ejaculation, but you've done such a good job with the various characters that I end up wanting to see how everything plays out :). CURSE YOU, I WAS ONLY IN THIS FOR THE FAPS!!!
ScuzzBucket
2017-03-03 06:49:52 +0000 UTCHey, nice to see a girl that knows what she wants. :D
Kyman201
2017-03-03 06:37:52 +0000 UTCAnd here i thought he was going to ask where casey was
S.R.R115
2017-03-03 06:14:01 +0000 UTCNot my Bria too...
meiwow
2017-03-03 05:57:49 +0000 UTCAwesome page, I was hoping for this. Lol she actually took the time to neatly fold her clothes before fucking XD. I hope this scene last for at least a couple more pages. Now just need a threesome scene with Casey, Bria and Fontaine and I could die happy.
Angelo
2017-03-03 05:42:56 +0000 UTC
