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Added 2015-10-30 03:10:40 +0000 UTCEDIT: Altered Mr. Fontaine's dialog a bit in panel two to make it more clear that the sex was done and they really would be just showering together.
Something I really like about Casey is that she's never in a hurry to get cleaned up. I ran into a strange issue in the dialog on this page, in that I confess I wasn't sure how to write out the letter grade he's giving her in the first panel. A-minus? "A Minus?" I have no idea. Hopefully it's clear enough here.
In other news I'm still open for commissions to Patreon supporters only. It's funny I'd planned on opening back up at Hentai Foundry over a week ago, but you guys have kept me busy enough that I haven't felt the need to open up elsewhere yet. I still have a couple's sale going on now where you get $5 off any pic with two full characters, if you're interested hit me up! :)
Comments
Oh there's no reason to change anything! What you have is perfectly fine and probably more grammatically correct anyways, I just wanted to chime in since I fancy myself a writer. And I thought about that as soon as I read the chapter. I'm in your head Reinbach!
Snizzlefit
2015-10-30 22:40:16 +0000 UTCLol that she is!
Reinbach
2015-10-30 14:14:24 +0000 UTCHey if you think what I have here is wrong enough to be worth changing let me know and I'll take your word for it. And way to call how things would go by the way. I remember last week you mentioned something about him giving her a grade.
Reinbach
2015-10-30 14:03:47 +0000 UTCAnother awesome page, that shows just how slutty she can be.
Bob Fink
2015-10-30 13:38:36 +0000 UTCNot that it really matters now but for the purposes of dialogue I think you might have been able to get away with putting "A-" and omit the actual word entirely.
Snizzlefit
2015-10-30 08:45:00 +0000 UTCThanks! I'm not really sure if it comes off as a joke but I found it pretty funny, the idea that this guy's come is dripping off her face but having to stand in a shower and talk to him would be too intimate for her.
Reinbach
2015-10-30 03:44:30 +0000 UTCI love how Switch chimes in at the end.
2015-10-30 03:29:28 +0000 UTCThanks! Personally this is my favorite one yet.
Reinbach
2015-10-30 03:21:57 +0000 UTCThis chapter has been fantastic!
Bryan Allen
2015-10-30 03:16:23 +0000 UTC
