Forbidden Spell - 007 (update 4)
Added 2021-10-18 19:01:01 +0000 UTCDon't worry, only I have change "dark elf" to "Dark Elf" and the recommendation of Heelsmaster, and Eddi.
I hope all is now correc
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yep :)
Eddie
2021-10-20 17:24:26 +0000 UTCSo... all changes done.
Rammaukin
2021-10-20 17:13:26 +0000 UTCThen... so ... that's all there is to change, right?
Rammaukin
2021-10-20 15:42:16 +0000 UTCI already feared it would be misinterpreted with us (Me and Heels) supplying only bits and pieces. Next time I will start by putting the entire text down here the very first time, just to be safe.
Eddie
2021-10-20 15:37:28 +0000 UTC🥺😩And you write this now? 😳
Rammaukin
2021-10-20 13:27:52 +0000 UTCAlmost there :) This is NOT correct: I must be in one of the deepest areas underground. Oh GODS. I think I know what happened, I took the old Dark Elf passat... If it isn't just a myth. This IS correct : I must be in one of the deepest areas underground. Oh GODS. I think I know what happened, I took the old Dark Elf passage... If it isn't just a myth.
Eddie
2021-10-20 13:24:21 +0000 UTCOk, give me 1h
Rammaukin
2021-10-20 11:54:11 +0000 UTCTwo things you need to change 1. Change "passat..." to "passage..." (this is the word after "Dark Elf") 2. Change the grey sentence on the bottom of the bubble from "if isn't just a myth." to "If it isn't just a myth."
Eddie
2021-10-20 11:17:59 +0000 UTCI don’t have the first sentence on, or is there some word wrong (which I can’t see)?
Rammaukin
2021-10-20 10:15:21 +0000 UTCOK :) then replace this -> "OH GODS, I think I know what happened. I took the old Dark Elf Passat...if isn't just a myth." by this -> "OH GODS, I think I know what happened. I took the old Dark Elf passage...if it isn't just a myth."
Eddie
2021-10-20 06:41:19 +0000 UTC<img src="https://c10.patreonusercontent.com/4/patreon-comment/eyJ3IjoxNjAwfQ%3D%3D/NEQPSWj0Mnjgl9kWZf8ajGBSHZcL7bU2SbUDY0kV4wzPj9aFwf-Tlu3HGQG7MUqd.jpg?token-time=1723334400&token-hash=1nyzGtpFYIflFdWfEob4Y4J25HWINyfwPC1gTNj1hCw%3D">
Rammaukin
2021-10-19 21:48:58 +0000 UTCThis was the last thing he wrote to me. I can change it again if it sounds so strange
Rammaukin
2021-10-19 21:45:24 +0000 UTCCheck this one again just as Heelsmaster said, it's passage not passat
Eddie
2021-10-19 21:03:06 +0000 UTCWhat Heelsmaster said :) Passage or Passat...
Eddie
2021-10-19 08:32:58 +0000 UTCMaybe don't include my typo. haha
Heelsmaster
2021-10-19 02:57:08 +0000 UTCOr... 🤫
Rammaukin
2021-10-18 22:51:45 +0000 UTCNice! tomorrow I will change it 😉
Rammaukin
2021-10-18 22:38:04 +0000 UTCOh GODS, I think I know what happened. I took the old Dark Elf passat...if it isn't just a myth.
Heelsmaster
2021-10-18 22:11:59 +0000 UTC"Oh GODS, I think I know. I took the old Dark Elf passage... if it's really not a myth"
Rammaukin
2021-10-18 21:11:43 +0000 UTCHmmm... I admit it, it's sound good, give me 5min
Rammaukin
2021-10-18 21:06:25 +0000 UTCI feel like the structure for that last sentence is odd. Maybe "Oh GODS, I think I know. I took the old Dark Elf passage."
Heelsmaster
2021-10-18 20:51:46 +0000 UTCAnticipation
Obviousagent
2021-10-18 19:44:11 +0000 UTC
