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Forbidden Spell - 007 (update 4)

Don't worry, only I have change "dark elf" to "Dark Elf" and the recommendation of Heelsmaster, and Eddi.

I hope all is now correc

Forbidden Spell - 007 (update 4)

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yep :)

Eddie

So... all changes done.

Rammaukin

Then... so ... that's all there is to change, right?

Rammaukin

I already feared it would be misinterpreted with us (Me and Heels) supplying only bits and pieces. Next time I will start by putting the entire text down here the very first time, just to be safe.

Eddie

🥺😩And you write this now? 😳

Rammaukin

Almost there :) This is NOT correct: I must be in one of the deepest areas underground. Oh GODS. I think I know what happened, I took the old Dark Elf passat... If it isn't just a myth. This IS correct : I must be in one of the deepest areas underground. Oh GODS. I think I know what happened, I took the old Dark Elf passage... If it isn't just a myth.

Eddie

Ok, give me 1h

Rammaukin

Two things you need to change 1. Change "passat..." to "passage..." (this is the word after "Dark Elf") 2. Change the grey sentence on the bottom of the bubble from "if isn't just a myth." to "If it isn't just a myth."

Eddie

I don’t have the first sentence on, or is there some word wrong (which I can’t see)?

Rammaukin

OK :) then replace this -> "OH GODS, I think I know what happened. I took the old Dark Elf Passat...if isn't just a myth." by this -> "OH GODS, I think I know what happened. I took the old Dark Elf passage...if it isn't just a myth."

Eddie

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Rammaukin

This was the last thing he wrote to me. I can change it again if it sounds so strange

Rammaukin

Check this one again just as Heelsmaster said, it's passage not passat

Eddie

What Heelsmaster said :) Passage or Passat...

Eddie

Maybe don't include my typo. haha

Heelsmaster

Or... 🤫

Rammaukin

Nice! tomorrow I will change it 😉

Rammaukin

Oh GODS, I think I know what happened. I took the old Dark Elf passat...if it isn't just a myth.

Heelsmaster

"Oh GODS, I think I know. I took the old Dark Elf passage... if it's really not a myth"

Rammaukin

Hmmm... I admit it, it's sound good, give me 5min

Rammaukin

I feel like the structure for that last sentence is odd. Maybe "Oh GODS, I think I know. I took the old Dark Elf passage."

Heelsmaster

Anticipation

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