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Hard Enough - Chapter 399 - The morning after

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He does leave a gauntlet in the forest at some point. So he’s going to have to fight someone. My money is on the poacher guy returning. Then when Brock does get home he shows up again now an old man watching the joust/is a participant.

Joyeus

Don't worry, next month is a double release and I will be starting on the chapter for it pretty early. I'm ahead on my weekly schedule so I can give it a fair go. Fingers crossed I can have the first chapter to be released sometime in the first week or so...

Viva01

Rhyhorn is having a great adventure. Maybe Brock can publish a children's book when he's back in his own time, of a "clearly exaggerated" adventure of a time travelling Rhyhorn, helping people and Pokemon while dressed as a knight. Most people will just think that he's adapting common fables of Pewter/Kanto, while some like Oak will be scratching their heads about the details, and wondering... meanwhile Brock, Sabrina, and Rhyhorn will be smiling mysteriously in the background.

The Tallest Tree

Didn't even think about it but Madam Bossu would not be such an unknown figure at this time. It would be an amazing opportunity for brock to meet her and sample her aura. No matter how much plastic/ditto surgery she gets to be younger I'm sure key elements of her aura would not change and this would give Brock an edge in recognizing her in the future.

Alexander Gofric

Didn't even think about it but Madam Bossu would not be such an unknown figure at this time. It would be an amazing opportunity for brock to meet her and sample her aura. No matter how much plastic/ditto surgery she gets to be younger I'm sure key elements of her aura would not change and this would give Brock an edge in recognizing her in the future.

Alexander Gofric

Reddd riot please

Lazybeep

“IT WAS ME LANCE” reversebrock.jpg

thevolunteer

For a shorter chapter it oddly felt longer than the last. Progression really changes perspective.

Jericho Rising

I'm really hoping for a badass moment where Brock faces down blackthorns and leaves a legend of the knight of viridian forest. I know its fan service, but the idea of Brock living through a bit of the war is exciting!

Michael Ox

Love this

CentaureHeart

The funniest bit, would be if he gets back, tells Oak about where and when he's been, and Oak pulls out another half dozen sightings throughout history; 'Celebi Adventures 2: I'm gonna kill that onion'

Mr Mouse

I just love this story. Thank you!

Mario Schade

I thought they killed him?

Zer0

I wonder if that one-eyed scarred onix is gonna reappear again? double irony if that onix goes to Flint!

angie bell

I’ve been thinking of other time periods that Celebi could take Brock to and keep coming back to Ogerpon. Nobody knows where they came from before Kitakami. They both covered their faces with masks, due to looking different. Also, Ogerpon’s first trainer vanished with no trace after the Loyal 3 steal the masks. A story with plenty of possible time travel shenanigans and confronting Brock with a region new to him.

Kacy Smith (chrono2x)

Wanted a bit more time in the farther past, but can't complain cause this chapter is golden. F'ing onion fairy! Also. Young flint with a chip on his soldier? Time for a good ol' military beatdo- I mean training exercise... yeah. that.

Mr_Penguin27

Thanks for the message

BlackRazaras

Poor Brock. Not only did he have to deal with his grandmother hitting on him, he's gotta deal with his dad in his bratty preteen years.

Addicted2Games

Love how Brock trolled the Blackthorns in the past, having been the one to have given Oak his Dragonite that all the past and modern Blackthorn's are afraid of and breaking their sole custody over the Pokemon line. Brock single-handedly did a huge amount of damage to Blackthorn ambitions by handing over that egg to Oak. I really want Brock to let Lance know this happened that he was trolling and bullying Lance even before he was born.

Alexander Gofric

I love how you're doing this. At first I was concerned that this arc was going to take chapters and chapters worth of time and be limited to when Oak was young and focusing only on Oak, but having Brock travel back and forth through different times is a great way to go where he can be present for the truly pivotal moments of Oak and other's timelines. Also will be cool for Brock to meet various characters like Agatha, Oak, Blaine, Surge, Giovanni, Sabrina's parents and his parents at different stages of their life. Also for Brock to see first hand parts of the war that have been censored and therefore not really fully dissected in this fic too much yet. It also adds a lot to the knight's mystery as he and his pokemon never age just appearing and disappearing at key moments. I am so curious to see what other events and people he will witness and what other info he will impart. Also can't wait to see the end result when he comes back to the future and it is revealed to all these people that Brock was the mystery knight that saved the day.

Alexander Gofric

Hang on I just realized. Brock is named after the leader from Pewter during the war. That guy apparently helped Flint and Lola out. Is Brock named after himself?

Antrexor

That egg alone would leave such an impact on Sam, I look more and more forward to the post-travel discussion with the good professor. Flint! As if the last meaningful encounter wasn't nervewacking enough! Now we got a worse one. Will Lola drop by too?

ShinLupin

Poor Sam he had a positive male influence in his life for all of 3 days and then probably thought he got killed for decades

Antrexor

Man I can’t wait for Sam to bring up files showing the weird ass times Sir Boulder showed up throughout recent history.

thevolunteer

Lmao Brock: Have better taste in women! Flint: YES SIR Lola: *Is a strong badass, stops other soldiers from harassing him, fights traitorous members of her own family who are betraying Kanto* Flint: SURELY THIS IS WHAT SIR BOULDER MEANT!

thevolunteer

Brock: "...warn him to have better taste in women, or dont mess with the timeline and family... decisions decisions..."

willowskeith


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