Brock and Sabrina
Added 2022-09-02 07:25:34 +0000 UTCThis was one of the first artworks I commissioned and it's only just gotten finished thanks to andromedakrow on tumblr for completing this brilliant artwork.
What are people's thoughts?
If you have something you'd love to see, or an artist you'd like to recommend I look into, please leave a comment or flick me a private message! I'm thinking of locking in Ryot_ryot for some monthly artwork at the higher tier on Fiverr as well for some of those young Brock/Sabrina series!
Comments
Don't like Brock's eyes, looks more bulging than narrow
Pamela Gillespie
2024-09-19 04:32:17 +0000 UTCIt's not great. The proportions are just too far off and the blush lines made Brock look 40.
Cap'nSmurfy
2022-09-06 20:21:33 +0000 UTCI like this!
angie bell
2022-09-02 18:24:16 +0000 UTCSabrina’s forearms are fucking YOKED bro, what’s her routine?
Thanatos
2022-09-02 17:32:37 +0000 UTCSry to say, but Brock looks around 40 here. The body makes him look like a dad bod instead of fit and solid
Cerber
2022-09-02 17:17:05 +0000 UTCSo I do like most of this, but I do think the cheek outlines detract a little bit? but otherwise, I do love the whimsy and spontaneity that this scene suggests about Brock and Sabrina's relationship (that she can just jump in whenever). To be clear, I don't feel strongly enough about the faces that it should be changed or anything, I just wanted to comment on the tiny part of this image that I think could've been done better
steve
2022-09-02 13:28:22 +0000 UTCI do enjoy how sabrina would just randomly teleport to wherever Brock is. Would love to see more of them
Astralogical
2022-09-02 11:38:42 +0000 UTCNot a fan of the art style. Sabrina looks... not fat, but rather more plump than she should, given every canon depiction of her shows her to be quite slim. Brock just looks weird in a way I can't put my finger on, his face, his hair, his body all of it. He also looks a little bigger than I feel he should, like Sabrina, in a way that doesn't really imply muscle. May be that just wraps back around to the style again? Artist deliberately adds thiccness? Either way, cute concept, but not a fan of the execution. That's all on me, though, so as long as you're happy with it, then it's money well spent.
SupremeTempest
2022-09-02 09:29:33 +0000 UTCI checked some other artwoork from andromedakrow, and those weird doodles on their faces are supposed to be blushes! That makes a lot more sense, though why he didn't just well, color then in pink/red I wouldn't know. The artist makes the same doodles on other artwork. Overall, I think ryot_ryot might be a better fit. I also loved the last chapter, with more focus on their pokemon. I love your world building, and for that you need to focus on the people, but it just isn't the same without pokemon in the picture. Just tell him to make sure that they are supposed to be young :)
Dull Pen
2022-09-02 09:03:57 +0000 UTCIn fact, the whole image is corrupted somehow. Here is an example, of when those weird doodles are removed from their faces: https://i.imgur.com/o4uTWty.jpeg
Dull Pen
2022-09-02 08:56:52 +0000 UTCBrock is supposed to be 16. This is more like 35. I think the issue is the lines on their faces. Not sure, but those look like wrinkles?
Dull Pen
2022-09-02 08:46:18 +0000 UTCSomething about the face is just... odd. But the rest are great.
Ravenext
2022-09-02 08:46:16 +0000 UTCBrock looks rather...old. Looks more like his father dressed up as Brock, especially the wimpy way his hands are positioned. Sabrina looks, well, Caucasian whereas in the anime, and manga she looks more Asian (not to mention smiles less albeit that out of character smile could be for Brock.
Harmony
2022-09-02 08:18:55 +0000 UTCLike the shading and the hands look good, however the faces on both of them look kinda...cadaverish,, except when I zoom in
Wanous
2022-09-02 07:41:03 +0000 UTC
