裏で進めているNTR物の方
Added 2024-04-29 17:32:56 +0000 UTCLv99の勇者の俺が、魔王を倒した呪いでおチンポLv1に、それでも一緒に旅した姉貴肌の幼馴染の僧侶と騎士は気にしないよな！ の方も進めております。 これは、マーラ教を進行している村の教祖に、主人公の呪いを解くためにパンツを見せる事になったヒロインのチラ見せ。 短編というより中編のボリュームにしたい！ 前に書いたプロットのほうはこちら https://www.pixiv.net/illustration/edit/117489486
Comments
Remember its more fun when you take your time with sexual scenes and slowly describe the heroine's feelings. We should get to see why she is so overwhelmed by the Main Pole. Lastly, take your time with the first sex scene and with the penis reveal scene. Its more fun when the heroine only gets hints about the Main Pole's penis size for a while. For example you could have a scene where the heroine just gets to see the bulge and smells it but doesn't get to see it. The heroine should ideally always be surprised and overwhelmed by the Main Pole's masculinity.
The God of One
2024-04-29 21:13:37 +0000 UTCNice can't wait! I hope you add more details to the H-scenes. For example you can describe the smell, taste, shape (Straight or curved), length, girth, weight, hardness, the veins, and heat of the penis and balls. Also an easy way to increase the number of scenes and add more dialogue or descriptions is to have mirrored scenes. So have a scene with the MC and the heroine and later have the exact same scene but with the Main Pole and heroine instead. For example, the heroine may tell the MC that his penis fills her entire mouth, feels warm to touch, or that she can feel his penis shake when the MC climaxes. But in the mirrored scene the heroine could comment on how the Main Pole's penis feels feverishly hot and feels like it may burn her, that his penis fills her mouth and throat completely and reaches all the way to her lungs. Lastly, the heroine could comment on how the Main Pole's penis throbs powerfully as compared to the MC due to the amount of blood in his penis.
The God of One
2024-04-29 21:13:30 +0000 UTCめっちゃ期待してます。
Kurutawa
2024-04-29 20:57:46 +0000 UTC
