死神ちゃんと僕とおじさん_その7
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I'm sad that you are ending the Shinigami series :( I was hoping you'd remake the series and fully flesh out the story and her fall. As you made her fall way too fast! Though regardless this chapter was decent. I enjoyed the stomach bulge but thought having extra edits of the main picture would have enhanced the erotic quality. Such as before the penetration and after. But overall the scene was lacking in erotic quality. This is mainly a result of the lack of connection to an overarching story or erotic journey and the shortness of the H-scene itself. You need to connect all your H-scenes together to tell a story. That story being of the heroine's corruption or seduction by the Main Pole or Uncle.
The God of One
2023-09-04 02:18:46 +0000 UTC
