Thank you for your comments and constructive criticism.
Added 2025-07-21 00:18:21 +0000 UTCIt is actually refreshing when people actually show you where you're failing instead of just insulting you in comments
Also, does anyone know of a better translater than DeepL or Google translate (surprisingly enough, chatgpt is good but it's repeating words when I use it has become an annoyance for some I am sure. Halfway through the new effects of a gamer chapter and I am getting a migraine. Swahili just doesn't translate well)
Also, just to be sure on the fate of Celestial smith, based on some comments
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I missed out on the post asking for comments. Currently on a break from CS. The transition from the war in Essos was just really abrupt, it kinda threw off the rythm of the story. Plus, it felt like you were looking to transition to a jumpchain style story,mso I was waiting for this arc to finish to binge it and get caught up.
Sam Kemp
2025-07-21 09:39:12 +0000 UTCI use grammarly when writing essays but you’d still need to read it to make sure it makes sense
ParaPhone
2025-07-21 04:14:06 +0000 UTC
