With the new members with us i would like to open the floor to comments....
Added 2025-07-20 01:02:54 +0000 UTCI noticed that celestial Smith latest chapter didnt get as many likes as needed to show it was a satisfactory chapter. I can assume either people dont care for Robert's vengeance or want the story to wrap up....that or many find my other stories more interesting. Either way please comment on what you found wrong with it so I may improve please
We are in the last phase of the story with the war for the dawn coming up
Only things left unanswered are (if I have my notes correct)
Eurons plot with his mission from the drowned god
Robert's plot to try a d destroy Owen
And that's basically it.
I am also open to constructive criticism as this was my first serious non NSFW fic. So I wasnt sure how it would go but I hope I gave it my best and still will till the end.
As for what comes after.....
I am willing to take ideas. There was the whole op si in the dance who hates both sides and fights fit the smallfolk so you can say if that's your cup of tea then I will do it.
Until next time, have a great weekend.
Comments
To be honest, the one everyone thought was an epilogue chapter, but wasn’t. Killed the story for me. Why you would throw in a chapter that takes place generations into the future with insight into past events and ultimately the outcome of our MC’s story baffles me. It’s almost like skipping ahead after finishing the first arc to reading the last few pages in a book so you know how everything ends. My desire to read the following chapter after that one waned considerably. My feeling was, what’s the point? I would recommend you don’t do that again with any of your other stories.
Car Crash
2025-07-21 15:34:35 +0000 UTCTomorrow coming right up
Xuzar Horan
2025-07-20 16:11:31 +0000 UTCHey can u upload more of the mass effect gamer one please
Kazim Zaidi
2025-07-20 15:34:10 +0000 UTC
