Celestial smith chapter 27
Added 2025-01-19 17:29:23 +0000 UTCCelestial smith chapter 27: Seeing is believing
9k words. Started writing around 4am cause i couldn't sleep. Its 8pm now. Never doing that again
I have said this on my discord but ill say it here
I just want to point out that in scenes or chapters when I know there are many characters and I don't mention them, I am sorry but it is hard for every character to have input or appear in a scene or chapter. Just know they are there but I either forgot them or didn't know what input I could put for them in convos.
I almost messed up by forgetting the Tullys were there and they only were given a mention at the end. I am verry sorry.
Anyway enjoy until next time.
Comments
will correct in the public chapter. wanted to show him still drunk and confused but i went overboard. Thank you for criticism
Xuzar Horan
2025-01-21 06:31:09 +0000 UTCThey will be SUPER pissed off when they fail. And will probably do something REALLY stupid.
Fire_Fox2590
2025-01-21 01:48:57 +0000 UTCI'm thoroughly enjoying the story, obviously because I actually joined the Patreon! My concern with this chapter is the hyper fixation on Robert "Booze-addled brain" or his "drunken brain". It got really repetitive.
YayPepto
2025-01-21 00:25:07 +0000 UTCDon't apologize, the chapter was excellent!
Hayden Williams
2025-01-19 22:30:07 +0000 UTCI hope Ned was at least smart enough to betroth all of his children. No Southern matches.
Richard Alvarez
2025-01-19 22:20:58 +0000 UTCI bet it will be because of Sansa's Goddess level beauty
Iori Daemona Angel
2025-01-19 22:12:48 +0000 UTCyou could always have owen heal willas of his limp to gain reach favour
weird song
2025-01-19 21:30:35 +0000 UTCI bet one of the southern ladies tries to seduce owen in the next chapter or two
weird song
2025-01-19 21:05:30 +0000 UTCthat was allot fun. am guessing not one will be picking there mouths off the floor for the next few months lol. hope Owen keeps his invisibleity spells to hand. u know all those noble lady's are going to be hunting him 😄
PhotoStorm
2025-01-19 20:46:56 +0000 UTCI have question, in the rebellion, the Arryn became hand of king, Baratheon became king, and the gold digging late comer that didn't lose anything Lannister had his daughter became queen... What did North get? How was North rewarded for it's work? And now South will demand more without anything good in return? Hopefully this North will not become doormath, Ned's oath to Robert or not, his first priority should be North and his people wellbeing and honor, honor that was constantly stepped on
Nisiris
2025-01-19 19:42:53 +0000 UTCMAGNIFICENT CHAPTER!!!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Rachel N
2025-01-19 19:30:16 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! As amazing as everything else they’ve seen so far has been the ability to magically hide an army has got to be the most terrifying thing for the other lords to see 😅
Lictor Magnus
2025-01-19 19:00:01 +0000 UTCI just know Joffrey is going to cause some stupid incident, can’t wait for the fallout
Psyren1596
2025-01-19 18:29:06 +0000 UTCThis was worth reading the shocked expression of everyone. Urgh, Cersei that old bitch is gonna be trouble...
Iori Daemona Angel
2025-01-19 18:20:03 +0000 UTCMany thanks for the beefy chapter.
ShinySpiritomb
2025-01-19 17:56:57 +0000 UTC
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