Need a bit more fire to how she talks. But the part where she is thanking the teacher that was really close. But overall awesome!!! Keep rocking it out!
Kasey Hugill
2020-06-04 18:20:58 +0000 UTC
I think you did a good job, not a perfect but that’s understandable since you’re not exactly the same person
Ashiya Shirou
2020-06-04 11:10:02 +0000 UTC
Pretty spot on, but maybe just ever so slightly deeper and angrier when needed.
MrRubidron
2020-06-04 04:27:38 +0000 UTC
I like it the way it is tbh, women don't need to be "deeper" sounding. Maybe more raspy tho
Sanji
2020-06-04 04:23:10 +0000 UTC
A little deeper on tone.😶
Keondra McIntyre
2020-06-04 03:37:55 +0000 UTC
Maybe a little deeper just a tad, otherwise you've got the character down
Church Christenson
2020-06-04 03:06:39 +0000 UTC
Need more oomph for the angrier bit, but otherwise real good. 👍