ATM Vol. 5 and Rewrite Tomorrow
Added 2023-01-25 22:58:49 +0000 UTCJust a bit busy. We're getting closer to the end of Vol 1 of the rewrite! It's exciting! What has been your thoughts on it so far compared to the original?
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(Just to clarify, I completely understand them being cut. This Sora seems to be more in control of herself, and I'm not sure the type of scenes I liked would mesh well with the rewritten plot. Leaving them out genuinely might be for the better storywise.)
Ryan
2023-01-26 06:25:18 +0000 UTCNot the black out scene specifically, but things like the (second) party where she was mind controlling people.
Ryan
2023-01-26 06:04:32 +0000 UTCTell me what you like about the small things and maybe I can add them. 😊
SME
2023-01-26 03:16:21 +0000 UTCI think it's a better story and quite a bit more focused than the original, even if I miss a lot of the small bits. But that's just the sad reality of editing really.
Ryan
2023-01-26 01:06:55 +0000 UTC
