Love and Peace (In the New Age) - beta 1.2
Added 2015-03-28 08:42:48 +0000 UTCBeta 1.2 of Love and Peace attached--no additional scenes yet, but the whole opening has been rewritten for better perspective from Riki's POV, and also several details have changed for better rollouts of introductions, because there are a lot of introductions for even a relatively small story. I would love to start getting feedback if anyone wishes to take a look before the story is done.
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There is an unfinished story starting here <a href="http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7232918/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7232918/</a> which I am still planning on reworking again; it doesn't quite have all the kinds of details that made it into the current iteration of the setting. Other than that, all previous stories in the INA universe are WAY out of date but you can probably find them buried in my galleries somewhere.
Rick Griffin
2015-03-28 20:04:10 +0000 UTCI agree, the opening is better than original and I can hardly wait to see what follows. I do have two questions. First, is there anymore material that is based within this setting? If so, where can I find it? Second, will there be another round of coupons for your ebooks?
Boxer
2015-03-28 19:22:30 +0000 UTCI think that the opening is better!
Henry K9
2015-03-28 10:30:55 +0000 UTC
