Love and Peace (In the New Age) - alpha 1
Added 2015-01-28 01:07:52 +0000 UTCSUPER rough draft of Love and Peace. There are almost certainly a ton of disconnects, continuity errors, spelling errors, grammar errors, lack of description, pacing issues, unnecessary repetition, etc. I already know what most of them are, I am MAINLY posting this here for the benefit of anyone who wants to see my early process. Among things I already know, I barely described the raku and the reynar at all. It is very simple: raku = raccoon, reynar = fox, and roko = "people" in general. Total length is about 16,000 words, or 64 manuscript pages
