I'm kind of embarrassed this is taking me a while
Added 2020-11-15 10:06:48 +0000 UTCOkay folks,
I'm working on Delvers 5. I have like 4 chapters in various states of completion. One thing that is slowing me down and I hadn't thought about is the amount of world building I'm having to do.
You'll see when you read even the first chapter.
So speaking of which, I'll give you the first line of the first chapter:
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*One day before the events at the end of Delvers LLC 4, Golden Handcuffs*
Comments
someone's gonna knock the smirk off his face for once?
J B
2020-11-15 21:00:49 +0000 UTCIt's a Dolos Chapter. I think you guys are gonna like it.
Blaise Corvin
2020-11-15 20:30:15 +0000 UTCHm. I don’t know that I would start with a flashback. But I would have to read the chapters a bit more Edit: I would start with Bezzi!
Cameron C
2020-11-15 14:44:37 +0000 UTCEh with a beard you could have a passable resemblance
Paul Robinson
2020-11-15 13:07:43 +0000 UTCI'm gonna have everyone eating a picnic and exchanging puns for 150k words.
Blaise Corvin
2020-11-15 10:25:39 +0000 UTCWorld building sounds nice, but only as long as the plot actually moves forward somewhat.
Kurt A
2020-11-15 10:08:46 +0000 UTC