Nora 1, working blurb, second try

**Please comment**

Okay, I am including the original version here.

What do you all think?  1 or 2?
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Preface to either:

*Nora Hazard’s adventures begin in the country of Berber on the planet Ludus.  The story starts over three years prior to the events of Delvers LLC: Welcome to Ludus.*



#1
 

In the Delvers LLC universe, on the planet Ludus, life is often cheap. Gangs of disillusioned young women roam the city streets of Bittertown in Berber, looking for trouble and usually finding it.
 

Nora’s childhood hadn’t given her many options in life.  With nowhere else to go after she’d lost her family, she had joined an old friend in a street gang and found an unlikely home there.
 

However, after circumstances force her to leave her second family, even causing her to flee Bittertown, she may need to find new allies in unlikely places. Nora is about to discover the hard way that Dolos orbs, like any serious power, can complicate everything.
 

Survival isn’t easy on Ludus, especially for someone like Nora. It would help if bounty hunters would stop chasing her, too.


#2

 

Nora Hazard has not had an easy life.  Only through resilience, spirit, and friendship has she managed to endure.  Her unbending will has even led to a leadership position within the notorious Jackals gang of Bittertown.

Unfortunately, tragedy is about to befall Nora.  Grudges from the distant past and movements of shadowy organizations may take away everything she is familiar with, all the she holds dear...possibly even her life.

Danger has never stopped her before, but survival may require escaping her old life, embarking on an insane, desperate journey.  Since Nora has been born and raised on Ludus, an alien planet, she understands how dangerous her world can be.  

Unfortunately for her enemies, Nora's no pushover.