Artist 2 - Henry concept sketch - draft 1
Added 2017-08-12 23:25:51 +0000 UTCNot gonna lie - I kinda dig Henry's new weapon here.
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#soundslikeaplan
Micah Rutledge
2017-08-14 20:13:26 +0000 UTC#imworkingonit
Blaise Corvin
2017-08-14 20:07:55 +0000 UTCAll this art is nice, but is there a chance of a new chapter soon?
Micah Rutledge
2017-08-14 20:04:21 +0000 UTCWell, she still has this drawing to finish and 4 more to do...lol. I will pass along some of the critiques today, though.
Blaise Corvin
2017-08-13 16:42:07 +0000 UTCYa... I'm voting for artist number one.
B Thomas
2017-08-13 12:32:08 +0000 UTCI didn't say it wasn't functional. I said it looked stupid :)
Micah Rutledge
2017-08-13 08:12:29 +0000 UTCThere is something off about the face it seems a bit too gentle and a little efeminate, because the lips are too big and the way it looks is ....arrogant but not the "I am a baddass orb bonded and can kick your ass" kind of arrogant more like "i look better then you" kind. Now the good part :) weapon looks bad ass :D , but the way he holds it in the picture is better for a sword rather then an axe/club/mace
Lachezar
2017-08-13 07:44:25 +0000 UTCHow connected to his Asian heritage IS Henry? Would he have Asian style overlapping plates?
Zachary Martin
2017-08-13 03:44:27 +0000 UTCThere is actually a reason for flared leather, it rebounds and offers more protection. I've seen more than a few manly men squeel like babies because they got hit on their "cool" armor.
Zachary Martin
2017-08-13 03:43:05 +0000 UTCOh I thought that was like a visual "TahDah!" But now that I look again I notice his shorts are outside the armor which is a neat touch for armor that emerges from the skin. I'd love to see a variant with tattered clothes falling off or spikes just kind of glommed onto his bronze breast plate.
Zachary Martin
2017-08-13 03:37:32 +0000 UTCI think the spikes coming out of his back are supposed to be his steel spikes. I dunno. I kind of told the artists to do what they want. I have a 3rd artist doing all this stuff soon too
Blaise Corvin
2017-08-13 03:34:15 +0000 UTCThat might be a cool talking point if Henry was ever to use his armor in front of a blacksmith. "Your armor... Shouldn't work." Henry: "Dark Steel is cool."
Zachary Martin
2017-08-13 03:32:29 +0000 UTCI assumed this was a take on the Dark Steel armor. The only thing that threw me off on that point was the complete lack of spikes.
Zachary Martin
2017-08-13 03:30:42 +0000 UTCTo cartoonish I guess
Josh W
2017-08-13 02:22:43 +0000 UTCThe only armor he actually uses in the text is a bronze breastplate and his steelskin too.
Blaise Corvin
2017-08-13 02:14:18 +0000 UTCFirst reaction: love it. The look on his face... Screams "This bitch...". The weapon is functional. The armor is missing some leg coverage and the shoulders are good up to the shoulders. Those plates near his neck are not functional. I've tried em, don't work. They impede any arm movement above the shoulder.
Zachary Martin
2017-08-13 01:30:39 +0000 UTCI tend to agree (I mean, he is my character), but I was looking for different artists interpretations. This artist is female. If more people chime in, I will pass these along.
Blaise Corvin
2017-08-13 00:01:18 +0000 UTCThink more iron man, than midevil knight. also, if you have skyrim for the pc or xbox one, try some weapon mods for the mace. Ive seen some cool ones that could be adapted for a METEOR mace(which is the coolest kind of mace in the world) It should look more epic.
Micah Rutledge
2017-08-12 23:46:09 +0000 UTCwell the armor is all wrong. I would love an excuse for armor flourishes now that he has dark steel. Henry is a manly man and would never wear boots like that. If you want some flavor over the shoulder look at the Irelea League of legends model. But henry is a demi god, who is cool with drag, but he is still a manly straight guy, IMO. The quality is def sub par to the last artist.
Micah Rutledge
2017-08-12 23:40:41 +0000 UTCnot a fan. Get back on artistbroker, and make henry great again!
Micah Rutledge
2017-08-12 23:36:12 +0000 UTCIf you have specific complaints, I can pass them along if others agree. I mean, this is why we do this. :P
Blaise Corvin
2017-08-12 23:35:39 +0000 UTCDifferent artist. This is artist 2.
Blaise Corvin
2017-08-12 23:34:59 +0000 UTCthe weapon is fine. Though not as cool as i imagined. Its the everything else that kind of makes me throw up in my mouth a little... Is this the same guy that did adoh? The face is great. Its the everything else that i hate
Micah Rutledge
2017-08-12 23:28:16 +0000 UTC
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