Hands Free Beta (Old Story)
Added 2023-07-23 17:04:25 +0000 UTCSorry about the delay in schedule, but Iβll have the next 2 stories out by tomorrow! π
Iβm really excited to have produced this video, it was a lot of work so please let me know any and all thoughts! Iβll admit, itβs basically the first video Iβve edited, so all critiques are more than welcome- in fact, Iβm demanding them! π
This is a shorter story so I figured it wouldnt be as time consuming, but itβs already an existent story. My plan is to do this with all future stories, so please let me know any way to make the experience better! Is the wait time per slide too long? Too short? More gifs? Less, etcβ¦
Just please give me feedback, if itβs perfect- then tell me! π₯°
Comments
Points well taken! β€οΈ Thank you for the feedback! π₯°
FriedTwice
2023-07-24 15:49:58 +0000 UTCIt might work for shorter stories or for like commercial style films. You'd need to lead with a girl and put text after it. Could make for neat bonus feature to the longer writing; creating 90 second moving summaries but yeah I'm desperate for the regular formula
Joshua McDowell
2023-07-23 22:00:43 +0000 UTCIt creates a nice chance to highlight certain emotions+ phrases and create pace and put emphasis on changes but I REALLY REALLY did NOT like it. I couldn't enlarge the text or especially the images like I'll do sometimes. Plus like others said the pacing was weird it would go too fast or too slow. Sometimes my brain wants to peer through every sentence, others I'm kinda jumping around reading paragraphs around the gifs and the changes. Plus a lot of times I like to sneak a peek at the models before I start reading which makes it tough. Another thing is that I'm out in the middle of no where, video can get tough to stream where your html text comes through even on tough signal days. More gifs would help but that I think breaks away from your remarkable writing and this format feels like we are trading a couple of nice things and losing a lot of what works super well
Joshua McDowell
2023-07-23 21:53:52 +0000 UTCI would much rather them as a text format. It makes them easier to read at the user's own pace
Masamune
2023-07-23 21:27:20 +0000 UTC
