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thank u love it, seems u are a sagiri enjoyer, so im glad u like this one. welcome here😊

Maozi Dan

Okay this was worth subscribing! 😍 You nailed it!

SimonSenpai

Draw more footjob, I love your art(。・ω・。)ノ♡

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oohh!! i didnt noticed all the wrong spelling or grammar! probably im too focus of the scene, its too good lol. well thank u for looking for error there, ill double check the dialogs next time😆 im glad u love it too😌

Maozi Dan

I want to highlight some possible grammar mistakes that stood out to me (don't rely on my grammar knowledge) "Comepletly" is wrong - Completely And I believe it is better to say "completely under my control" or "completely mine to control" (p.2) "Completely puppet" - I am not sure, but maybe rather say "What a nice/an obedient puppet"? (p.4) "Your just alone" - "You're just alone" (p.2) "Her lips is soft" - "Her lips are soft" (I believe that's right) (p.3) "Those toes looks" - "Those toes look" (if I remember right) (p.6) Yet, that's still a nice work, well done, Maozi!

Nickname

indeed, specially when shes mindless right lol

Maozi Dan

she is so cute😋

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