Second Chances Ch. 51 (KPop Demon Hunters)
Added 2025-11-10 22:53:07 +0000 UTC(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)
A/N: Not gonna lie, Free has really grown on me since the first time I saw the movie. Doesnβt crack my top three songs, but it did move from fifth to fourth as time went on.
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Comments
Ya know...I think Rumi should take it as a win that she didn't end up trying to talk to Celine while Bobby was working on his oral skills under Celine's desk. But I gotta agree with some of the others and note that Bobby is more akin to a big brother to the girls (age-wise), so Rumi needs to good-naturedly bust her surrogate mom's chops for cradle robbing....then complement her on her good taste π
Alun Lewis
2025-11-11 22:20:46 +0000 UTCI have one small thing. Bobby reads much more like the girlβs older brother than their father. That would probably make that line read a bit more impactfully as well as making it funnier
eric
2025-11-11 17:19:39 +0000 UTCNext chapter should start with Rumi staring Celine down for a minute then going "...I approve."
VaticToxic
2025-11-11 09:25:40 +0000 UTC
